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I'm going to need yall to get your discussion shoes moving. This is taking me longer than usual, there is A LOT of content to digest, good thing ya'll got 4 days!

 

 

 

Chapter 3 is up!

 

That's gonna be a no from me Jay I only have a pair of boogie shoes

 

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Lots of content which is great.

 

Sigh to those folks that are trying to get a payday off some big names.

 

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Perhaps, indeed. Of course. Yes.

 

These are the things I say when Jay asks for discussion.

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Everything is up now. I put in mad extra work so please make sure the extra effort was not in vain not only for me but for your fellow community mates. Have a good night, my back hurts! ALSO CHECK OUT THE MAIN EVENT

 

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Cheers as always, old man. Thanks for the week off.

 

Boob dropping the big facts. I actually thought about some of the stuff you put in there when our match was booked. Glad you put it in there.

 

On a real note thanks Cort for taking the lead on our stuff, with my schedule you make things easy.

 

Overall most stuff is just flowing which is great. So man strands that can be pulled to make some great stories for months.

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Cheers as always, old man. Thanks for the week off.

 

Boob dropping the big facts. I actually thought about some of the stuff you put in there when our match was booked. Glad you put it in there.

 

On a real note thanks Cort for taking the lead on our stuff, with my schedule you make things easy.

 

Overall most stuff is just flowing which is great. So man strands that can be pulled to make some great stories for months.

 

 

I hate that its so much work but I love that everyone is cooking on all cylinders, idealistically all these seeds being planted can last beyond lution. Assuming ppl keep with it, very excited for things to come.

 

 

That Main Event Doe...WOW, 2nd MOTY candidate imho.

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"Booking Wrestling is the most thankless no-win position anyone could ever be in. When things go well it's the talent that makes it work. When they go badly, it's because the Booker doesn't know what he's doing." - Eric Bischoff

 

Jookie: what website do we upload to againi for got

Our Hero: uploadafraud.com

Jookie: fuck u boricua

 

"I'm like Smythe, except Good" - Matsuda

 

OCW works best when it’s a melting pot of different ideas and opinions coming together to create some cool ass shit. It’s at its worst when people are only invested in their own/their pals’ content." - Paul Pugh
 

"I'm 5,9" - Ry
 

"I'm sorry if this sounds mean but OCW shouldn't be allowed to vote" - Jake Allen

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I am doing this because Jay wants me to be more involved. So I got you.

 

Promo Reviews

 

Bobby Mino: 5/5

It was smooth as always and I enjoyed the fan interaction along with the Kass callout. I am now fully excited for a match between the two, Nice work Bobby.

 

Quartz: 4/5

I enjoyed opening of the promo, I actually want to see if Rusty notices the shade that was thrown towards his match and to see if he will handle it accordingly. Now when we get to the Code side of the Promo I bursted in laughter towards the end for it was such a funny take from the opening. Gg Quartz and Code.

 

Ashely Moore: 4/5

I rate his promo high because even tho it was short it lead straight to the point while still holding some ground statements. Ashley said what she because she said what she said haha. I didn't find her taking things lightly I found her confident in herself. Love the confidence Ashley.

 

Terra Daturas: 3/5

The promo was a sweet gesture towards Valk but I just think more could of been done or said about it for I myself wanted to know exactly what Valk did in Terra's eyes to have a honorable and loving impact on Terra. But all in all it was a great way to show lockerroom respect.

 

Cort Marshall: 4/5

Yes 100% that guard was wrong and needs to fired immediately! Haha but what really got my attention is the fact that Cort needed a BAT to handle his ex partner haha you scared Cort? Wouldn't want to be that guy.

 

Heather Angelo/Furiosa & Alexa Hayes: 4/5

The promo is very interesting I now see who really runs the church...oof. When it comes to Heather and Alexa I am waiting for Heather to one day beat Alexa's....you caught my drift. Also poor Valk she's gonna enjoy her gift from Terra for only a short time because I feel like Furiosa is gonna wreck her in DN. Great promo it left me wanting more.

 

Austin Lee & Wrex: 5/5

I am actually going to let this promo speak for itself..I will be front row when this match airs!

 

The 4 Old Men: 3/5

I think the retirement center feel was unique but I don't see anything said that hasn't been said before..just old farts saying the same thing lol. I am actually not sure who I think should of won that game of checkers...chess..? I think the old men forgot what game their playing lmao Nice work guys.

 

Antonio Everrett & Doc Green & Coolidge: 5/5

Let me start by saying Doc and Antonio have made some very interesting statments that has me shook haha. When it comes to Coolidge I think his attack on Doc was funny because he kind proved their point. I think Coolidge is intimidated and just needs to let them be haha. But all in all I very much enjoyed this read. I feel like both parties were well balanced and left me wanting more! Please find a Partner Coolidge I wanna see this match!

 

Drago & Quartz: 3/5

I actually don't have anything to say about this promo..I don't know what to think about it but I am looking forward to the match! Also the van caught me off until Bubba was revealed haha.

 

Valkyrie & Cort Marshall: 4/5

Those are some very wise words from Valk and I think that chat will get Cort back onto the right track where ever that may be.

 

Justin Jehst & Elsa & Capo:

I thought I was reading a nice and elegant promo but then here comes Capo lmao! Priceless! I really enjoyed this promo because you can plainly see the different levels of class and on the plus side I get enjoy Capos dialogue. No complaints haha.

 

Sorry if I left the other Promos out but there are so many and I am tired so I might finish it up another day. Hope my reviews don't get me hate haha. Also I will give my 2cent on the matches soon.

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So if y'all noticed I changed up the thumbnails in an effort to have a little spice. Mind you this took a lot more time then I was ready to allocate last night so Riot took a hell of a lot longer. The idea is to show interesting thumbnails that my perhaps entice ppl to click! I'm not sure if it's worth the effort or not I guess I will know after a few days.

 

In addition going forward we will try to make at least one match a week "SUPER IMMERSIVE" which in Jay speak means Commentary from someone. Be it by me (HAH not likely), Killer Kramer, or Yake or whoever else wants to give it a shot. These matches will get the showcase spot at the front of our youtube. Eventually I will do some kind of compilation or something. Either way it is IMPERATIVE, that we get feedback on these changes now and going forward. Please be honest, do not hold anything back. The bottom line is JUST BECAUSE YOU TOOK LONG ON SOMETHING, DOESN'T MAKE IT GOOD! we are all adults and in order to improve we need to know what we can do to improve.

 

Thank You.

 

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Bernout Review

 

- You lose track of time reading Minio's immersive RPs. That happens because you forget you're reading a long RP and you just enjoy being there for it all. A win for boob pre-PPV would be massive for him.

 

Constance Fury vs Ashley Moore

 

Great match with perfect pace. A corner seated finisher is a new look for me, but damn that knee looked absolutely punishing. That CAW is great and like I said on Thirstmoil, the moveset is sick. She was in the writing for the Scum RP but I feel like the CAW has enough juice to have her own feud!

 

- Terra loves Valk because Valk is pure and kind and loves animals. Terra loves those things and thus- loves Valkyrie. Especially contrasted to the way she's treated by everyone else. It's an appreciation.

 

- "Thank you kindly" was a great dismount. I would hope Cort hangs onto that bat.

 

- What the fuck is going on in the B17 RP. Drums of chicken and crazy fucking code beating up Archer. pre-cursor to a wild ass match later in the show.

 

- I'm here for more Alexa insight. As one of the head members of Kasstianity, she can provide a lot of insight without actually wrestling, which she does here.

 

- Dialogue in Lee/Scum was ominous and excellently written. Continuity and consistency from one show to another is important and the PPV people know that it is.

 

- This retirement home gets disrupted often.

 

- Definitely a wild ride of an RP from The Uncrowned, who continue to grow into their own, continuing their feud with Coolidge... Sucks that he couldn't find that partner for this show, but I trust those involved will keep the pace after the break. Also, no matter who holds the belts after DN, just know that CQC ARE PIONEERS AND YOU ARE A PART OF OUR MOVEMENT

 

#MET

 

- Fun writing with Drago all the time. Several subtle throwbacks to other shows/other character pieces. Drago rarely gets serious in RPs but that's where he's at his best in my opinion. (like that Kass RP a few weeks back!)

 

- Valkyrie is keeping everyone's head on straight. The voice of reason is 5'0 tall and everyone knows it.

 

- Capo is such a hilarious scoundrel. He somehow finds a way to make really scumbag shit super entertaining and face(ish). Despite not being booked, he keeps finding his way onto shows to establish himself. Take notes rookies. Great writing for what is still likely my favorite angle heading into DN.

 

- FloJo is right, she has established herself into a more realistic and relatable character. A scroungy underdog in the similar vein as Valk but in a way that's more unhinged and unpredictable. I don't foresee anything other than a dominant victory for Dragana... but anything can happen and FloJo has done a good job maintaining that slight level of uncertainty. I champion Flojo would be wild.

 

- TTT DOMINATION BAYBAY

 

Match: Wrex vs Damian

 

Another match with great pace and enjoyable to watch. Doesn't drag on, great match and a great finish. That DDT came out of no where. With the TLBS feud coming to a head at DN and Damian dropping 2 in a row, now is the time for action for Damian Bourne. If you're not kicking assess in the ring, you need more character development to keep people interested.

 

Fuck you Wrex.

 

- P3 bringing back Jookie... but not actually. I'd be curious to know with the parody levels of P3 at an all time high.... if Jookie actually left that message or if it was """Jookie""". Damn Bumboclats.

 

- Jett Draven!! You son of a bitch!

 

- Some people shy away from physical altercations and fighting in just writing form, but Cort never has and I assume never will. Luckily for us, he can make it work without videos. If this DN match isn't a 20 minute fuckfest of weapons and gray bodyparts, I'll be disappointed!

 

Match: Rust Cohle vs H2No

 

Popped heavy for the all-champ TTT entrance as well as the Sensational Solution finally making their on screen debut. Rust Cohle learned a move or two from his match with Moon Man, moonwalking/crappling H2O a couple times. Gotta fix that, but regardless, he played it well and maintained composure down the line, picking up a huge win for TTT.

 

#MET!

 

- Wow. This is one of the few times we've seen Dragana disarmed. FloJo and Dragana continuing to do a great job of adding non-cliche intrigue to a match that is totally one-sided on paper. I want to root against FloJo but I REALLY WANT TO SEE HER WIN THAT BELT AND DO MORE STUFF

 

Match: Boob vs Shep

 

Bobby beat Cort Marshall already and now he's facing the 2nd half of AWOL AWOL. The whole match was super fun, yes, I'm including the multiple awkward missed kick/strike combos from both men. I'm always a mark for matches where the winner isn't clear from the jump. Minio looked like he was going to get smacked, but the 2 move combo that put Shep Red/Yellow from just single orange had me on my feet! ANYONES BALL GAM-- no. Just Shep's ballgame. The way he has established himself as a primary singles competitor - dating back to his match with Kass - is impressive and hats off to bookerman for putting him in a position to drive up the hype for his own match/feud by giving him opportunities against top-carders to shine.

 

Also, I'm fairly certain Nate's Shep attire has no non-2K assets on it, but he gives us an example of how to use all in-game stuff the right way. We have a lot of crazy fucking attires in OCW so a refreshing sight to see both men go simple yet unique.

 

- Benji is finally on a show! Yes! And also, he's... African? This is a great start to kinda establish a baseline of a character and something to build on. Also. 2 Bumbaclots in one show!? This really is a super show!

 

- Oldest trick in the book, but when you're a good person you go to help! God dammit Furiosa. Good vs Evil in it's purest form at DN!

 

- Epic RP from Trash.

 

#MET

 

Match: B17 vs Code vs Archer

 

Wild ride and unpredictable as multi-mans come. Archer throwing away back to back Yakman fins was awesome and there were many times I thought it was a wrap before the end. idk how he possibly kicked out of the Bingobomb but it cost him, because he finally got nailed with a Jack in the Box out of nowhere.

 

I mean, I had to rewind it because Jackman got rev'd, lost his fin, then had another one out of nowhere. Great finish, probably thought Bingo would get up and break it, but he'll have his chance at revenge at DN.

 

Not going to comment on my own match, only that Drago is easily one of the most fun to play in all of OCW. Never any issues with him whatsoever. Easy to write with, easy to fight, easy to communicate with, and handsome ta' boot. #BestInTheWorld for a reason.

 

I hope you guys enjoyed the commentary. Jay shat all over it but he also thinks Trash is bad so fuck his opinion.

 

#MET

 

Oh yeah, also shouts to Princess Jay who went out of his way for so many extras on the supershow that I'm sure it was a total ballache and he deserves shouts for that... and donations, if you're financially able, you should absolutely support his Patreon so you can show people how much better and more charitable you are than them.

 

What's even crazier is the shit he has planned for DN. You lot are spoiled. I am too.

 

Fuck Jaysin Sensation.

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Bernout Review

 

- You lose track of time reading Minio's immersive RPs. That happens because you forget you're reading a long RP and you just enjoy being there for it all. A win for boob pre-PPV would be massive for him.

 

Constance Fury vs Ashley Moore

 

Great match with perfect pace. A corner seated finisher is a new look for me, but damn that knee looked absolutely punishing. That CAW is great and like I said on Thirstmoil, the moveset is sick. She was in the writing for the Scum RP but I feel like the CAW has enough juice to have her own feud!

 

- Terra loves Valk because Valk is pure and kind and loves animals. Terra loves those things and thus- loves Valkyrie. Especially contrasted to the way she's treated by everyone else. It's an appreciation.

 

- "Thank you kindly" was a great dismount. I would hope Cort hangs onto that bat.

 

- What the fuck is going on in the B17 RP. Drums of chicken and crazy fucking code beating up Archer. pre-cursor to a wild ass match later in the show.

 

- I'm here for more Alexa insight. As one of the head members of Kasstianity, she can provide a lot of insight without actually wrestling, which she does here.

 

- Dialogue in Lee/Scum was ominous and excellently written. Continuity and consistency from one show to another is important and the PPV people know that it is.

 

- This retirement home gets disrupted often.

 

- Definitely a wild ride of an RP from The Uncrowned, who continue to grow into their own, continuing their feud with Coolidge... Sucks that he couldn't find that partner for this show, but I trust those involved will keep the pace after the break. Also, no matter who holds the belts after DN, just know that CQC ARE PIONEERS AND YOU ARE A PART OF OUR MOVEMENT

 

#MET

 

- Fun writing with Drago all the time. Several subtle throwbacks to other shows/other character pieces. Drago rarely gets serious in RPs but that's where he's at his best in my opinion. (like that Kass RP a few weeks back!)

 

- Valkyrie is keeping everyone's head on straight. The voice of reason is 5'0 tall and everyone knows it.

 

- Capo is such a hilarious scoundrel. He somehow finds a way to make really scumbag shit super entertaining and face(ish). Despite not being booked, he keeps finding his way onto shows to establish himself. Take notes rookies. Great writing for what is still likely my favorite angle heading into DN.

 

- FloJo is right, she has established herself into a more realistic and relatable character. A scroungy underdog in the similar vein as Valk but in a way that's more unhinged and unpredictable. I don't foresee anything other than a dominant victory for Dragana... but anything can happen and FloJo has done a good job maintaining that slight level of uncertainty. I champion Flojo would be wild.

 

- TTT DOMINATION BAYBAY

 

Match: Wrex vs Damian

 

Another match with great pace and enjoyable to watch. Doesn't drag on, great match and a great finish. That DDT came out of no where. With the TLBS feud coming to a head at DN and Damian dropping 2 in a row, now is the time for action for Damian Bourne. If you're not kicking assess in the ring, you need more character development to keep people interested.

 

Fuck you Wrex.

 

- P3 bringing back Jookie... but not actually. I'd be curious to know with the parody levels of P3 at an all time high.... if Jookie actually left that message or if it was """Jookie""". Damn Bumboclats.

 

- Jett Draven!! You son of a bitch!

 

- Some people shy away from physical altercations and fighting in just writing form, but Cort never has and I assume never will. Luckily for us, he can make it work without videos. If this DN match isn't a 20 minute fuckfest of weapons and gray bodyparts, I'll be disappointed!

 

Match: Rust Cohle vs H2No

 

Popped heavy for the all-champ TTT entrance as well as the Sensational Solution finally making their on screen debut. Rust Cohle learned a move or two from his match with Moon Man, moonwalking/crappling H2O a couple times. Gotta fix that, but regardless, he played it well and maintained composure down the line, picking up a huge win for TTT.

 

#MET!

 

- Wow. This is one of the few times we've seen Dragana disarmed. FloJo and Dragana continuing to do a great job of adding non-cliche intrigue to a match that is totally one-sided on paper. I want to root against FloJo but I REALLY WANT TO SEE HER WIN THAT BELT AND DO MORE STUFF

 

Match: Boob vs Shep

 

Bobby beat Cort Marshall already and now he's facing the 2nd half of AWOL AWOL. The whole match was super fun, yes, I'm including the multiple awkward missed kick/strike combos from both men. I'm always a mark for matches where the winner isn't clear from the jump. Minio looked like he was going to get smacked, but the 2 move combo that put Shep Red/Yellow from just single orange had me on my feet! ANYONES BALL GAM-- no. Just Shep's ballgame. The way he has established himself as a primary singles competitor - dating back to his match with Kass - is impressive and hats off to bookerman for putting him in a position to drive up the hype for his own match/feud by giving him opportunities against top-carders to shine.

 

Also, I'm fairly certain Nate's Shep attire has no non-2K assets on it, but he gives us an example of how to use all in-game stuff the right way. We have a lot of crazy fucking attires in OCW so a refreshing sight to see both men go simple yet unique.

 

- Benji is finally on a show! Yes! And also, he's... African? This is a great start to kinda establish a baseline of a character and something to build on. Also. 2 Bumbaclots in one show!? This really is a super show!

 

- Oldest trick in the book, but when you're a good person you go to help! God dammit Furiosa. Good vs Evil in it's purest form at DN!

 

- Epic RP from Trash.

 

#MET

 

Match: B17 vs Code vs Archer

 

Wild ride and unpredictable as multi-mans come. Archer throwing away back to back Yakman fins was awesome and there were many times I thought it was a wrap before the end. idk how he possibly kicked out of the Bingobomb but it cost him, because he finally got nailed with a Jack in the Box out of nowhere.

 

I mean, I had to rewind it because Jackman got rev'd, lost his fin, then had another one out of nowhere. Great finish, probably thought Bingo would get up and break it, but he'll have his chance at revenge at DN.

 

Not going to comment on my own match, only that Drago is easily one of the most fun to play in all of OCW. Never any issues with him whatsoever. Easy to write with, easy to fight, easy to communicate with, and handsome ta' boot. #BestInTheWorld for a reason.

 

I hope you guys enjoyed the commentary. Jay shat all over it but he also thinks Trash is bad so fuck his opinion.

 

#MET

 

Oh yeah, also shouts to Princess Jay who went out of his way for so many extras on the supershow that I'm sure it was a total ballache and he deserves shouts for that... and donations, if you're financially able, you should absolutely support his Patreon so you can show people how much better and more charitable you are than them.

 

What's even crazier is the shit he has planned for DN. You lot are spoiled. I am too.

 

Fuck Jaysin Sensation.

 

NO FUCK YOU!

 

The Shepard v Bobby

Constance v Ashley

H20 vs The French

Drago vs Quart

 

kinda came down to the last second, I was super impressed. Bobby coming close to a W I was hollering THEN WHAM WHIF WHIF WHAM. :(

 

H20......... And Kass yelling CARSUCO, Carasaka? something french ... :(

Welcome to OCW, keep tough skin, speak your mind, and most of all have fun.-Betterness

"I'm going to be brutally honest here guys... all we really need for a good Riot is a few RP's from Our Hero himself... he's an awesome writer!!!" - Smythe

CCWJustinTime: just funny how the shit i do goes un appreciative

[10-01, 00:19] Jookie Marley: fuck u nigga

[09-01, 23:50] Mr.Bentley: uploadafraud.com

[09-01, 23:45] Jookie Marley: what website do we use 2 upload now?

"Summercide was 2 white girls away from being a cook out" - Cyberbully 2099

" makes me laugh how its gone from all ambition era holding the titles, to 3 guys from 07 holding the main titles..haha

welcome to the 'Pensioner Era' - Parker

"This is all part of my plan to equalize the playing field until we have a roster of people I can actually BEAT" - Bobby Digital

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NO FUCK YOU!

 

The Shepard v Bobby

Constance v Ashley

H20 vs The French

Drago vs Quart

 

kinda came down to the last second, I was super impressed. Bobby coming close to a W I was hollering THEN WHAM WHIF WHIF WHAM. :(

 

H20......... And Kass yelling CARSUCO, Carasaka? something french ... :(

 

CARCOSA! CARCOSA! CARCOSA!!!!

 

Also

 

Not French

 

#MET

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