Nicholas Flash Posted March 5, 2010 Posted March 5, 2010 " Lights Start Going off " * Weird Music starts playing * " Crown acting confused " * You Start hearing the Word Flash Flash * " Screen Comes On, " * On The Screen it Says * " up with it came our pain and fear that we'd already lost each other. we both knew that the end was near " " Because The Flash Has Arrive " [CENTER] [IMG]http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f238/ZeRoDyNaStY11/JNZ.jpg[/IMG] [/CENTER]
Jacob Trance Posted March 5, 2010 Posted March 5, 2010 Soo... This is the promo room, not a tv show, so there wouldn't really be a crowd. That's my first tip. The second tip is to use proper English. Third tip, "screen comes on," means someone said those three words. Qoutations are speech marks as it means someone is talking. Asterix' (*) invoke actions.
Craig Casey Posted March 5, 2010 Posted March 5, 2010 Hazard's got an alt? http://i43.tinypic.com/5fiyk7.gif
Nicholas Flash Posted March 5, 2010 Author Posted March 5, 2010 Sorry =( Still learning. abit and If u guys want u could take it down.. [CENTER] [IMG]http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f238/ZeRoDyNaStY11/JNZ.jpg[/IMG] [/CENTER]
Trevor McManus Posted March 6, 2010 Posted March 6, 2010 It's better than my first promo. Stop shitting on him. We complain when new guys don't do anything then when they do you guys shit on him? All the stuff Trance said is valid advice although he came across as a bit of an asshole. Other than that, while this isn't great, you're new and you'll pick it up. Take a look at the Riot show and have a look at how we do promos. But keep in mind that Riot is regarded as a show while this room would be for, say, out of hours interviews or you could encorporate some sort of press conerence where you get talking about OCW or whatever. Just be inventive. http://positivesharing.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/08/complaining.jpg [23:39] locoNY911: You get solace in the fact you arent a fuck up. 2k9's better than 2k8. Like being shot in the knee is better than being shot in the head. - Guy Fausto [18:40] locoNY911: I mostly aggree with your statements
Iceberg LeTuce Posted March 6, 2010 Posted March 6, 2010 It's better than my first promo. It's better than KD's current promo's.
Parker Posted March 6, 2010 Posted March 6, 2010 http://img40.imagefra.me/img/img40/2/3/6/stebag/f_y3xkhtppkthm_a0fc914.gif :p but seriously..not bad for a 1st atempt, still better than half the shit Hazard churns out. http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/5774/sig2uq.jpg 2 x Hardcore Champion (Longest defending OCW champ,19 defences) 1 x NA Champion 1 x Pride Champion 1 x TV Champion 2 x OCW World Heavyweight Champion F.I Winner 2012 MOTN vs Leonheart @ Wrestlution 7 'Don't worry about no one else, hows my hair look' - Tiberius Dupree 'Wipe you ass and go to bed' - Sensation to B17
Smythe D. Wonder Posted March 6, 2010 Posted March 6, 2010 " Lights Start Going off " * Weird Music starts playing * " Crown acting confused " * You Start hearing the Word Flash Flash * " Screen Comes On, " * On The Screen it Says * " up with it came our pain and fear that we'd already lost each other. we both knew that the end was near " " Because The Flash Has Arrive " sometimes people just suck at giving advice rook... but to tell you the truth this is the kind of thing that could have gone on the show... Use Windows Movie maker to make this a promo video... a bunch of flashing... then the text... it can work... the concept was good... but OCW is cream of the crop when it comes to characters and selling themselves... make it a true to form promo... make a video then upload it... and post it in the Riot thread... you have 4 days I think... put something together for the show... Signature 1 - The Alpha Heel Signature 2 - Spear 5 (F) - Stargazer Finisher 1 - Flapjack 2 (F) - The SDW Finisher 2 - Reality check (G) - Dawonderful Dream Finisher 3 (i'm cool enoigh to claim 3 moves) - The Darkside - THe Million Dollar Dream
Pugh Posted March 6, 2010 Posted March 6, 2010 but OCW is cream of the crop when it comes to characters and selling themselves... What crop did Hazard come from? No.
Iceberg LeTuce Posted March 6, 2010 Posted March 6, 2010 What crop did Hazard come from? The one fucked up by insectacides.
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