Parker Posted May 20, 2016 Posted May 20, 2016 Shout out to some of the stuff that stood out to me [as I'm still watching /reading] Nightmare..my man, new theme works so much better..love the look. Sophia vs X was a war of botched springboards..I loved it. Gentleman Jack's t-shirt..I died...That ending was nicely done. I hate Dennis' finishing move...it's one of the most anti-climactic finishers ever ...build...build...booooooooo. 1 http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/5774/sig2uq.jpg 2 x Hardcore Champion (Longest defending OCW champ,19 defences) 1 x NA Champion 1 x Pride Champion 1 x TV Champion 2 x OCW World Heavyweight Champion F.I Winner 2012 MOTN vs Leonheart @ Wrestlution 7 'Don't worry about no one else, hows my hair look' - Tiberius Dupree 'Wipe you ass and go to bed' - Sensation to B17
Bloom Posted May 20, 2016 Posted May 20, 2016 Hey now...I didn't start using the 'hoot stomp' until Pugh called me AJ Devitt during Tank gate. Blame him for what I've become! I merely embraced it... I'm glad the Authoritarian storyline has bled over to Turmoil. If the purge shows up one more time...that would be one more appearance than Sensation, proving Mugen cares about all of OCW, rather than one show :( I don't like you. Also shout out to Nightmare and Nani for showing what ACTUAL discussion is.......<3 Welcome to OCW, keep tough skin, speak your mind, and most of all have fun.-Betterness "I'm going to be brutally honest here guys... all we really need for a good Riot is a few RP's from Our Hero himself... he's an awesome writer!!!" - Smythe CCWJustinTime: just funny how the shit i do goes un appreciative [10-01, 00:19] Jookie Marley: fuck u nigga [09-01, 23:50] Mr.Bentley: uploadafraud.com [09-01, 23:45] Jookie Marley: what website do we use 2 upload now? "Summercide was 2 white girls away from being a cook out" - Cyberbully 2099 " makes me laugh how its gone from all ambition era holding the titles, to 3 guys from 07 holding the main titles..haha welcome to the 'Pensioner Era' - Parker "This is all part of my plan to equalize the playing field until we have a roster of people I can actually BEAT" - Bobby Digital
Mugen Posted May 20, 2016 Posted May 20, 2016 I don't like you. Also shout out to Nightmare and Nani for showing what ACTUAL discussion is.......<3 Don't fight whats true. Already a better boss Hall of Fame - Class of 2017
Cactus Gauge Posted May 20, 2016 Posted May 20, 2016 Interesting ending to the show. Little anticlimactic after you start off by blowing up a bike! lol. I enjoyed reading my first show, but also feel like I had my teeth knocked out for the shitty job lol. I am going to the drawing board to think through this next promo and character. Want to be on the Watering Hole? Message Me. http://ocwfed.tv/recapppv/Award2k16/bestnewsegment2016.png B17 - "Jordan Jax has Stone Cold moves. Rock taunts and Cena jorts. He's the wrestling equivalent of a hipster."
Bloom Posted May 20, 2016 Posted May 20, 2016 Interesting ending to the show. Little anticlimactic after you start off by blowing up a bike! lol. I enjoyed reading my first show, but also feel like I had my teeth knocked out for the shitty job lol. I am going to the drawing board to think through this next promo and character. Keep the char, just gotta tweak a lil. I mean you could go fresh, but I don't know i'd say let it ride. Welcome to OCW, keep tough skin, speak your mind, and most of all have fun.-Betterness "I'm going to be brutally honest here guys... all we really need for a good Riot is a few RP's from Our Hero himself... he's an awesome writer!!!" - Smythe CCWJustinTime: just funny how the shit i do goes un appreciative [10-01, 00:19] Jookie Marley: fuck u nigga [09-01, 23:50] Mr.Bentley: uploadafraud.com [09-01, 23:45] Jookie Marley: what website do we use 2 upload now? "Summercide was 2 white girls away from being a cook out" - Cyberbully 2099 " makes me laugh how its gone from all ambition era holding the titles, to 3 guys from 07 holding the main titles..haha welcome to the 'Pensioner Era' - Parker "This is all part of my plan to equalize the playing field until we have a roster of people I can actually BEAT" - Bobby Digital
Matsuda Posted May 20, 2016 Posted May 20, 2016 Interesting ending to the show. Little anticlimactic after you start off by blowing up a bike! lol. I enjoyed reading my first show, but also feel like I had my teeth knocked out for the shitty job lol. I am going to the drawing board to think through this next promo and character. If you're talking about what I said don't feel that way. The grading scale is purposefully brutal to make you guys strive for the impossible ten. There's a reason the best stuff on the show was a seven. A ten on this scale is compared to the best stuff I've seen on the site, a 5 is more like average and servicable but nothing more. If anything take the positives, I said you're a good rper with a good look and move set. Take the criticism and proceed accordingly. 3
Versus Posted May 20, 2016 Posted May 20, 2016 Gentleman Jack's shirt http://i.imgur.com/FFXPbb4.gif 2 http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d103/JDVS/footprints_1.jpg
Dennis Black Posted May 20, 2016 Posted May 20, 2016 Shout out to some of the stuff that stood out to me [as I'm still watching /reading] I hate Dennis' finishing move...it's one of the most anti-climactic finishers ever ...build...build...booooooooo. all the cool stuff was taken! 1
Dustin White Posted May 21, 2016 Posted May 21, 2016 Thanks for all the critiquing guys, I've been pretty packed with exams and tests as the school year closes up but I will try to get on here more often and put more of a background behind my guy. The original bases was a scumbag douchebag heel but now I see how the promo after the match was completely opposite of my plan. I'll try to get more character progress soon. 2 http://i.imgur.com/5qFW50j.gif ADAM COLE BAYBAY!!!
Dennis Black Posted May 21, 2016 Posted May 21, 2016 Thanks for all the critiquing guys, I've been pretty packed with exams and tests as the school year closes up but I will try to get on here more often and put more of a background behind my guy. The original bases was a scumbag douchebag heel but now I see how the promo after the match was completely opposite of my plan. I'll try to get more character progress soon. takes time! i'm still figuring things out.
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