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  1. Hahaha Bobby Minio reduced to belt signing duties!
  2. Why!? Terra no want to hurt frand
  3. Drago is always MVP... DRAGO ES BEST
  4. Valkyrie has less faith in you than she does her roommate, let's not pretend this is a loving friendship. #BetItAllOnTTT
  5. It's not the most shameful thing I've been guilted into, but it's up there.
  6. Bobby Minio's entrance with the belt nearly brought tears to my eyes. What a wholesome promo that somehow fit a largely non-wholesome face, just because of the gravity of the moment. AC Cobra with more gold hopefully this time following up on it. I wish AC Cobra would use his backpays/take advantage of damage, but his matches always tend to be fun. Tre capping it off with a GOLD PHOENIX HOOT. Cort is even taking shots at FAME. That's supposed to be one of your guys, you old pricks! #NoMoreWWELogo - Sparks vs Indy Ninja was fun, sadly Sparks CAW is now completely different than what we have been seeing the first few months, but so long as it's consistent from this point on, it should be okay. Although Elliot still showing some rough ring work, I'm more disappointed in a lack of promo from him this show. I'm pretty sure this match had no building around it or representation from either guy. Bummer! Ashley really doesn't like Valkyrie! SHES NICE DAMMIT. The Inception gathering themselves. I'm somehow rooting for them on RIOT. Ahh yes, Terra vs Alyssa... The match that almost nobody knew was 6 weeks in the making. I hope everyone enjoyed the culmination of all the bullying/attacks on Terra since the season started as much as I enjoyed making it.... Bullies never win, kids! Blaine Dragana II: Electric Boogaloo What a twist! I didn't expect (but am pretty excited to see) Braylin insert himself with a solid worker and get some more exposure. Don't look now, but Bray's theme is kinda growing on me too. Maxwale is as classic a wrestler as they come. Straight promo *no words, just me shrieking like a little kid seeing Tiberius Dupree back in a promo* Corn Ricketts is 2/2 in making me LOL at random nonsense RPs. The way this is building towards his in-ring debut is hilarious! Empress is just here to fuck shit up... and I love it. dam... just. dam. Austin Aries got totally outclassed in-ring. Wasn't a beautiful match by any stretch but solid enough. Essentially a squash, and now we're at Bournistico. Tag Team Champions. Wowza congratulations. Popped at "I was talking about Dupree" from Bertha Hopefully I made the imagery vivid enough for everyone to realize what I was doing with the "talking championships" with Uncrowned. Aries step 1: Dissension I criticized Maxwale matches in the past but this one was so much better! Even though it was 19 minutes, both Buddy and Max were in the right spots doin' wrastlin things. Story telling at it's damn near finest. Always had the impression Buddy was swinging his dick in front of the crowd and showing off and MAxwale was frustrated, trying to take him down. YAS! Be nice to Flojo, yackman. Damn Bertha, you scary. Dragana proves she is still queen shit but man, seeing her without the strap is.... strange. ACE?! WHAT'S WITH ALL THESE OTAKU MOTHER FUCKERS GOING AT DRAGANA. Drago vs H2O! Drago may be the tipping point we need to tilt this faction war one way or the other. Excellent C-community promo, touching on several key things in one RP and MORE BRAY SCREENTIME. I love it! Yes Valkyrie! Expose these old fucks for who they are! I want OCW to keep on building more and more on FAME's control and abuse of power. It's a great angle and it shouldn't be limited to just the factions. Boy oh boy was I pissed when I saw the Uncrowned's theme shit. This match was fucking insanity for me RL, several times throughout I thought we were done for, but alas... boring ass rookies don't stand a chance against CQC or RESILIENT RUSTTTY. Capo why you gotta hurt that man. It just ain't right! Another straight up war between Jackman and B17, that spot where they both rev'd each others fins back to back was awesome. Great match and fitting ME. This last segment took up a full fucking page and this brings in a whole new level for Jacob Trance. 5 minutes of kicking the shit out of people, but nothing better than the theme hitting and him carrying Jay Fury out of the back. Also, Aries Step 2: Betrayal NO AUSTIN LEE! HE WAS AGAINST YOU THE WHOLE TIME! SOMEONE NEEDS SOME SUPPLEMENTS! I somehow hate Scumsciety even more than I did before. Tanks for a great show and tanks for Jay destroying himself to make it all happen!
  7. Holy shit that final segment. What is happening?
  8. Baby as in it's young! It's brand new!
  9. Ehh, me using quotation marks when you never said that probably misrepresented your point a little bit. I just meant to use it to define the general point, but I didn't intend it to be damning sorry about that. I get what you're saying.
  10. Thanks for your reviews you fuck!
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  12. QUICKLY I haven't read the fucking RPs yet but - Fuck me 4 title changes. This completely shifts the course of OCW. WE'RE ON OUR HEADS with 4 new champions. 1. Women's title is now in the hands of someone who is not afraid to rip your face off and eat it. Also the title maintains it's awesome valor by staying in the hands of a capable fighter and talented writer. This frees up Dragana to do more tings and have some fresh FUEDS and that title remains the top dog in the division. 2. Pride championship - CONGRATS BOOOOBBBYYY. I know it' sbeen a long time coming and boy am I glad you took it from Shep. With Ter and Telos getting involved with it and a few other competitors on the horizon, it's only a matter of time before the belt is contested once again. Cort Marshall has some interesting directions he could go in from this too. No clue where he's headed now that nor him or Shep have the belt. 3. CCW Title there is no finer image of someone holding the title than Wrex's destroyed bloodied face throwing that bitch up. He's come a long way and truly deserves it. Shocking interference from Mistico, I can't make sense of it but hopefully all will be sorted on SUPER TRUMOIL. Good for Wrex and now I hope he loses it yesterday. 4. World title... Fuck FAME. Where does Kass go from here? H2O Experiment over? Everything has changed in the course of 4 matches and the next few weeks are going to be like hitting a reset button. Oh... Everything except for Drago being the BITW. Nobody taking that belt from him. TTT THROW IT UP, THE FINAL WORD COMING IN A FEW DAYS AFTER EVERYONE HAS TIME TO READ THE SHOW
  13. In OCW, we don't post spoilers on the first page in the forum. This allows people to be able to open the show later on without seeing what happened. These replies you're referring to are literally to get us to the 2nd page so we can talk about the show faster. I simply do not agree. The shows are all about freedom and allowing people to do things they want to do. "assigned" promos would be terrible. I have no problem getting through shows and watching them/analyzing them is a highlight of my week, twice a week. I guess I understand that people don't/can't follow them like that, it does take some time, but you can watch in pieces. I'd also recommend to watch matches in 2x speed. (entrances/cutscenes aside obviously). Try that. You do have a point about over-saturation. It's been talked about a lot that people don't need promos that are basically there for no reason. That would help lower it a bit. Also, thank you for the review. As a handler, I know all too well that the best way to inspire is to read other people react to your hard work. Your previous reviews were short and forced with just "i like this" but this actually provided insight. I know it's hard to be expected to review them each time and you dont have to. A comment here or there about stuff that stuck out to you does wonders for people. Even if you can't touch on everything, it will let the handlers know that "hey, your shit isn't impactful enough to talk about" Good work
  14. ricky's back bitches
  15. Will you two shut up? We're on page two already.
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  17. 521 was the show of crappling. Guys - If you get reversed, please do not moonwalk or spam an attack button to avoid a counter. That is crappling and it is bad FPR. Sometimes it's stress/habit so one time here or there is forgivable. I found myself cheering head over heels for Rust and he ruined it by crappling into a finisher, which took me out of it. Jerry Boy Savage hit a finisher on orange, that's an IMMEDIATE toss out, but that's been covered. Crapples in Telos/Tre, crapples in Quartz/Bobby, just crapples crapples crapples. Lets' do better at the PPV please. More later on the writing/angles (hopefully)
  18. Not to overstep my bounds, but what Spider is referring to is the Dark Match system established by the staff that is supposed to be the replacement for offline FPR tests. He's not talking about general FPR police complaints. When a rookie is scheduled in a Dark Match on a card, they're instructed to record it and their direction is to submit the match to Spider first and foremost and only after he approves it should it be put in the submissions section for TV. In DM's FPR police doesn't even have to be involved. I was the one that pointed it out to him because I think if we're going to have this system, then the least we can do to give it a chance is actually follow the instructions. It may be on us as a unit not being clear enough on instructions so people weren't aware they had to send to Spider first. A system is not a system unless everyone is on board with it, so this stuff can't happen. According to what Spider said in an earlier post, this isn't the first time it's happened either. So we just need to get everyone on the same page. That's all.
  19. Says the guy who [insert degrading action in order to get to page 2]
  20. Ooooooh boy! I cannot believe that person said or did that thing to that other person! I am interested to see how that person responds!
  21. Stronk and stylish
  22. Not mine! @Cort http://www.ocwfed.com/forum/showthread.php?22890-Ladies-Night-fallout. Don't be inactive and uninformed. She beat up EMTs after her match with Dragana and as per the settlement, needed to be suspended for her actions.
  23. NO . Out with it SENSATION. CRITICISM IS A CATALYST FOR POSITIVE CHANGE
  24. TTT PRESENTS QUICK REVIEW - YAKE HITS EM WITH THE RAZZLE DAZZLE Quick bullets and notes from an AMAZING RIOT, because my time is precious and also fuck you. The pinnacle of show quality to be honest. - "Why are you turning... AH MY SHIRT." That's right folks, we just saw arguably our BEST male babyface in the company piss on a personal bodyguard. Cort did a fantastic job being fun and unique here and that's not easy to do when you RP as much as he does. I would appreciate a tad more vivid imagery in RPs like these, and his strength is still all in the charisma, but this was very fun either way and sets up a later angle. - Uncrowned almost have their own style segment at this point. CHECKIN IN WITH DOC AND ANT. Always set up the same. Always executed well and never turning the focus primarily from one person or another. Other tag teams could learn from this balance. Match: Mistico and Telos Not a whole lot to say, because of it's placement on the card, it was a great warmup to the show. I thought Telos had him dead to rights! Good to see stick skill improvement from Telos each match. Progression! Mistico came in as the favorite and was able to escape. - AC with one of the absolute funniest RPs I have ever read in OCW. God dammit that punchline was on point. For anyone too dense to understand the joke... AC playing meta with himself and has to remind OCW staff who he is by putting himself in a situation he's usually in - being pinned. That jogging the guards memory and my picture of AC just walking in with a despondent face. Just so simple yet so so good. - Pugh shoots HARD on Stevie Clark! - This Twitter beef has escalated. Buddy Burns waits in the shadows to STRIKE WHILE THE IRON IS HOT. Just watch out for his FPR, Buddy! - The Trashy Oaks Live-In Medical Center was one of my favorite bits so far this season. I sometimes don't love RPs I do although I realize they need to be there, but this one left me super happy and I hope the imagery and situational comedy resonates with the rest of you idiots. Match: Doc Green vs Coolidge Coolidge breaks FPR Green fights through it Coolidge continues to break FPR Green wins anyway Next - Cort is a joy to work with and some of the ways he manifests these one-liners is Rocky-esque. I still hate his walls of text and I have to break them apart when we work together... but hey, he's the one that makes the better content so team work make the dreamwork. - I was half expecting "shep" to not be shep at all the way he was hushed throughout. Not Bobby's best promo but impactful on a loaded Pride scene either way. - I will MARK for Kasstianity promos! - The very high quality long RPs are broken up by high quality small RPs in this show. In Blain vs Dragana's case.. It's a very high quality long RP. Unique idea, elements of serious and funny, two great writers, meta references. Dewp - TTT4Lyfe - Match: Tayy vs Shep & Follow Up The match? One thing - FUCKMEGODDAMMITIMISSEDTHEREVERSALONTHEKNEESTRIKEFUUUUUUUUUUCKIHADEMSONOFABITCH Great match Shep. Fun, short, competitive. Champ wins, newcomer shows he can compete. Everyone wins. Follow up was so much fun to write that I read it back several times to ensure I could picture everything happening. The way we wanted to do this would have been too difficult to pull off given the tools WWE 2K has and the time we had to do it. Hope you all enjoyed it. - Fucking P3 stealing my thunder with a PSA/commercial style of their own. LEAVE TRASH ALONE YOU FUCKING WEIRDOS. Laughed throughout the show, probably the 2nd funniest promo on the show. Match: ElsAce vs Valkyrishlie I saw 20m and was worried but 4 very entertaining women and a female tag match in a FUN FUN FUN new - look women's division had me locked in throughout. Competitive til the end and the finish was AWESOME. The corner move into a coup de grace was a super fun fin. Ashley going back to bitchy heel after building some face heat and sympathy at the start of the feud. Confusing but glad Ashley didn't lose her true nature. I like her character and it'd be tough to pull off a face without a long-term change. - TLBS LAYING DOWN THE LAW. Let's see if the kid can overcome the BITW at Clash! (assuming Drago accepts the challenge) MATCH: AC Cobra vs Pugh Despite Cobra still lacking a lot of game skill and nuance with the new stuff this year, he competed with Pugh, who gave him a bunch of openings, some he actually capilaized on. I really thought he'd win this one and it would have been great, but alas. Nobody fucks with the Pedigree. - Tre with a perfect example of representation when not booked. Get your name out there, kiddos! This kinda thing, while not blowing you away from a writing standpoint, will be fresh in your mind when you see him wrestle next, whether consciously or not. - Stacy was all over this show! Yet again, she's shoved aside by this weird admiration/rivalry/unlikely duo. Pugh's hair gets cut after his show randomly before Bobby takes out years of anger on his face. MATCH: TTT vs P3 BEAT DRAGO'S DICK CLUBBBBBBB! TTT DON'T TAKE PINS FROM P3! - Risky move from Valkyrie going an ankle deeper into the drama category. Understanding people are going to be weird about it and not view it for what it is. If you think relationships/love etc haven't been a part of wrestling, then you need a history lesson. Watch the shows as entertainment shows and creative outlets and enjoy the damn thing. Finally getting some more backstory about this mystery person! Fits in perfect with the angle currently running and this is a perfect instance of having a deeper human aspect of a character outside of hopping from feud to feud. Attempts to develop a character so that there's identification of the person THAT'S INSIDE the feud is always going to be praised by me, it's something I've striven to do since I joined!! This show was fucking awesome. So much quality writing and outside of a longish AC/Pugh match and a FPR hulabaloo Coolidge match that detracted from the quality a bit for me, the matches fit right in. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK YOU FUCKS
  25. You did this to yourself!
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