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Good stuff. I hope we see more on the shows going forward. Don't forget to use the Morrison Method going forward. Names and actions are in bold text, dialogue is not. ie.---------------------------------------------------- Quartz slumps down in his computer chair and lets out an obnoxious burp, tapping his belly and raising his PRISTINE SUNGLASSES. Quartz: Let's see what they're saying about ME on the website... Quartz grabs the mouse and clicks on his face on OCW.com. Quartz: What!? How could you think that? welovefaces4245!? Quartz: I got something to prove now! ------------------------------------- This eliminates the need for the quotation marks around dialogue and the asterisks around the actions. Also much more pleasing to the eyes. (along with the fact that it won't be posted on TV unless it's in this format!) Keep it coming!

Foist - Thanks Kent and Kass and co. for the arena. It looks great. Secken - PLEASE don't wait til the last minute to submit your matches. We wanna have everything rendered and commentated asap to avoid last minute headaches. Thanks!

Can't wait! The ladies don't get nearly enough burn on TV and now we get to watch them perform. Also... that F4W elim!!!!

Interesting way to look at it. I hadn't really had that view (although it's fairly obvious). I just couldn't dump Tayy and use Dillinger to side with someone else with no continuity or follow up. Hopefully going forward once the two entities are really separated, it'll become more interesting. Thanks for your feedback . Now then http://memegenerator.net/img/instances/48683675/fuck-you-jay.jpg

I'll take that one. With a combination of a MAJORITY of the storyline being set up in the promo room/offseason.... him only being around since July... Tayy being considered an alt.... and really general lack of interest in the character (among other criticisms) I can see why it wasn't well received/understood. This played a lot better in my head. Please know though - I heard the criticisms that he was a bland, flavorless "caricature" and I completely rebranded him as a more energetic/colorful CAW. Hopefully once more people get to see him in action and more and more... He'll be received better.

TTT PRESENTS SATAN'S EVENING QUICK TOTS MY GAI - Glad Jay getting involved with the RYU trash talk finally. Great reveal and the build up over the last month finally pushed this raggedy bitch over the edge! Fuck you, Jay! - H2O cramping my style as always. Sad! MATCH: Bray vs Drago Drago opens the card with another strong W. Last time it was AC Cobra, who simply lacks the stick skills to compete, but Bray is pretty good at the game. What makes this open challenge so fun is that Drago is on both consoles... so you just never know til... whatever the hell Bray is... came down to the ring. - I really wanna see who this person is with Valk. She's done a great job building this up over time. I would have been too excited for the reveal and done it too early. WHO ARE YOU!? - Holy shit. That video from B17 and Jackman was cool as hell. Twitch thought so too, as the views skyrocketed during the show. Perfect example of an awesome flavor video that adds so much immersion and realism to our shows. MATCH: Scum vs Austin Aries Fuck you, I thought his name was Austin Aries. I saw someone comment on his attire saying that it was derivative, but I don't watch WWE so fuck that! I love his attire. I actually thought Scum would handle these two thoroughly. I was not prepared for the chemistry. DOPE finish with Lee kicking the Rican out of Fury. - Pop'd hard at "Baby It's Rollin' Outside". - Oh no. The Terra RP with FloJo is in all bold. DON'T HURT ME MIKE - Who in de hell is Alyssa! Yes! More women's competition. With the additions of Elsa/Terra/Alyssa/Constance... we might actually have some more fire ass women's matches down the line... and whomever wrote this. It's really good as an intro. Looking forward to more. - Jehst getting me all jacked for one of about 12839 hardcore matches this show! I have been waiting so long to watch the conclusion of this and I will not be disappointed. MATCH: FLOJO vs DRAGANA FloJo put up a hell of a fight early and midway through. I actually thought she might pull this off until late-game... when Dragana just continued to murder her with back to back sigs on the chair and capping it with an amazing finish. The follow up was good too, continuing to cement FloJo as a more refined character compared to last year. - TAYY IS BACK! Turmoil people shit on this return, but making that video was a blast and I thought it would have been some of my finest work if people even knew who he was. Bummer to know that nobody really remembers his angle with Dillinger and Telos from... well, every show since Anny 14. - I can't lie to you, The Inception is a great stable name and this RP does wonders with all 3 going over as faces. More later

Pre-page 2 highlights The VP was unreal. I hope people enjoy the commentary by itself, some really gold lines that weren't heard in the stream because of the shouting. He's. Back. TTT Present's Devil's Night was a smashing success.

CARCOSA! CARCOSA! CARCOSA!!!! Also Not French #MET

Bernout Review - You lose track of time reading Minio's immersive RPs. That happens because you forget you're reading a long RP and you just enjoy being there for it all. A win for boob pre-PPV would be massive for him. Constance Fury vs Ashley Moore Great match with perfect pace. A corner seated finisher is a new look for me, but damn that knee looked absolutely punishing. That CAW is great and like I said on Thirstmoil, the moveset is sick. She was in the writing for the Scum RP but I feel like the CAW has enough juice to have her own feud! - Terra loves Valk because Valk is pure and kind and loves animals. Terra loves those things and thus- loves Valkyrie. Especially contrasted to the way she's treated by everyone else. It's an appreciation. - "Thank you kindly" was a great dismount. I would hope Cort hangs onto that bat. - What the fuck is going on in the B17 RP. Drums of chicken and crazy fucking code beating up Archer. pre-cursor to a wild ass match later in the show. - I'm here for more Alexa insight. As one of the head members of Kasstianity, she can provide a lot of insight without actually wrestling, which she does here. - Dialogue in Lee/Scum was ominous and excellently written. Continuity and consistency from one show to another is important and the PPV people know that it is. - This retirement home gets disrupted often. - Definitely a wild ride of an RP from The Uncrowned, who continue to grow into their own, continuing their feud with Coolidge... Sucks that he couldn't find that partner for this show, but I trust those involved will keep the pace after the break. Also, no matter who holds the belts after DN, just know that CQC ARE PIONEERS AND YOU ARE A PART OF OUR MOVEMENT #MET - Fun writing with Drago all the time. Several subtle throwbacks to other shows/other character pieces. Drago rarely gets serious in RPs but that's where he's at his best in my opinion. (like that Kass RP a few weeks back!) - Valkyrie is keeping everyone's head on straight. The voice of reason is 5'0 tall and everyone knows it. - Capo is such a hilarious scoundrel. He somehow finds a way to make really scumbag shit super entertaining and face(ish). Despite not being booked, he keeps finding his way onto shows to establish himself. Take notes rookies. Great writing for what is still likely my favorite angle heading into DN. - FloJo is right, she has established herself into a more realistic and relatable character. A scroungy underdog in the similar vein as Valk but in a way that's more unhinged and unpredictable. I don't foresee anything other than a dominant victory for Dragana... but anything can happen and FloJo has done a good job maintaining that slight level of uncertainty. I champion Flojo would be wild. - TTT DOMINATION BAYBAY Match: Wrex vs Damian Another match with great pace and enjoyable to watch. Doesn't drag on, great match and a great finish. That DDT came out of no where. With the TLBS feud coming to a head at DN and Damian dropping 2 in a row, now is the time for action for Damian Bourne. If you're not kicking assess in the ring, you need more character development to keep people interested. Fuck you Wrex. - P3 bringing back Jookie... but not actually. I'd be curious to know with the parody levels of P3 at an all time high.... if Jookie actually left that message or if it was """Jookie""". Damn Bumboclats. - Jett Draven!! You son of a bitch! - Some people shy away from physical altercations and fighting in just writing form, but Cort never has and I assume never will. Luckily for us, he can make it work without videos. If this DN match isn't a 20 minute fuckfest of weapons and gray bodyparts, I'll be disappointed! Match: Rust Cohle vs H2No Popped heavy for the all-champ TTT entrance as well as the Sensational Solution finally making their on screen debut. Rust Cohle learned a move or two from his match with Moon Man, moonwalking/crappling H2O a couple times. Gotta fix that, but regardless, he played it well and maintained composure down the line, picking up a huge win for TTT. #MET! - Wow. This is one of the few times we've seen Dragana disarmed. FloJo and Dragana continuing to do a great job of adding non-cliche intrigue to a match that is totally one-sided on paper. I want to root against FloJo but I REALLY WANT TO SEE HER WIN THAT BELT AND DO MORE STUFF Match: Boob vs Shep Bobby beat Cort Marshall already and now he's facing the 2nd half of AWOL AWOL. The whole match was super fun, yes, I'm including the multiple awkward missed kick/strike combos from both men. I'm always a mark for matches where the winner isn't clear from the jump. Minio looked like he was going to get smacked, but the 2 move combo that put Shep Red/Yellow from just single orange had me on my feet! ANYONES BALL GAM-- no. Just Shep's ballgame. The way he has established himself as a primary singles competitor - dating back to his match with Kass - is impressive and hats off to bookerman for putting him in a position to drive up the hype for his own match/feud by giving him opportunities against top-carders to shine. Also, I'm fairly certain Nate's Shep attire has no non-2K assets on it, but he gives us an example of how to use all in-game stuff the right way. We have a lot of crazy fucking attires in OCW so a refreshing sight to see both men go simple yet unique. - Benji is finally on a show! Yes! And also, he's... African? This is a great start to kinda establish a baseline of a character and something to build on. Also. 2 Bumbaclots in one show!? This really is a super show! - Oldest trick in the book, but when you're a good person you go to help! God dammit Furiosa. Good vs Evil in it's purest form at DN! - Epic RP from Trash. #MET Match: B17 vs Code vs Archer Wild ride and unpredictable as multi-mans come. Archer throwing away back to back Yakman fins was awesome and there were many times I thought it was a wrap before the end. idk how he possibly kicked out of the Bingobomb but it cost him, because he finally got nailed with a Jack in the Box out of nowhere. I mean, I had to rewind it because Jackman got rev'd, lost his fin, then had another one out of nowhere. Great finish, probably thought Bingo would get up and break it, but he'll have his chance at revenge at DN. Not going to comment on my own match, only that Drago is easily one of the most fun to play in all of OCW. Never any issues with him whatsoever. Easy to write with, easy to fight, easy to communicate with, and handsome ta' boot. #BestInTheWorld for a reason. I hope you guys enjoyed the commentary. Jay shat all over it but he also thinks Trash is bad so fuck his opinion. #MET Oh yeah, also shouts to Princess Jay who went out of his way for so many extras on the supershow that I'm sure it was a total ballache and he deserves shouts for that... and donations, if you're financially able, you should absolutely support his Patreon so you can show people how much better and more charitable you are than them. What's even crazier is the shit he has planned for DN. You lot are spoiled. I am too. Fuck Jaysin Sensation.

Shorter review because I'm late and have a small penis. Man oh man. There is a lot to dig into here. A LOT of bad (we can do better) but I think a lot of good that is going un-recognized in reviews so far. - B17 as a godfather for the B-Community/OtaKRU is hilarious. - Very disappointing to see the PS4 bullshit make it onto a TV show. I won't point fingers, just sucks to see, especially during a women's debut. I like Constance's moveset a lot! Give her a proper debut next show. - Meh RP. Code is a fucking weirdo... and I'm looking forward to seeing him in the B-Community. - My only RP of the show between all 4 characters. I'll just leave this here: - B17 being both opponents is a power move. Say what you will about it, but it's interesting. This man inserting himself into the mix and actually WINNING the 2nd match despite being orange and red at the start. - Dragana proving she doesn't need the mouthpiece to cut a dope RP. She's pressing on Valkyrie (hehe) as a lovable draw in OCW. Underrated RP - RP of the night! Archer and Jehst's angle is very interesting and in a lackluster show, this RP sticks out! - Such an improvement on the sticks from TLBS. He is flying under the radar as a rookie in OCW. He may not be a perfect English speaker, but his effort on both ends of the OCW spectrum have not gone unnoticed! HUGE WIN! - ohhhh snap. Usually I just markout for Valk RPs, this one has my super interested in her story more than a cheap pop. DEVIL'S NIGHT! - As already mentioned, absolutely no representation from like 5 Turmoil rookies. No effort week after week is disappointing to say the least. - End of ME makes more sense. I saw Loki on the card and was confused. Was really hoping an interference/surprise ent made this a tag match, and the production on the video could have been better, but it did it's job. Devil's Night is coming and Austin is back baby!

I'm super late on the review, so I'll post a shorter one with things that stuck out to me. - Sensation's conspiring against TTT continues... Glad to see he's at least pulling out the big guns with KD and H2O and.. oh shit. OCW's biggest draw. Too bad none of them stand a chance. - Even though it's short, I really liked Braddock's RP and even better was his simple but awesome match attire. I consider this more effective than the horse-head, as a serious RP thing rather than just a funny entrance attire... and he won against OCW's S13 hardest worker! Keep going Brody! - Antonio is low-key really good at this game. - P3 continues to be wildly entertaining week in and week out. Never fails to get multiple laughs out of me. I can't imagine sitting in on a back and forth with these two making one of these RPs. - Insane RP from two of the best to do it with H2O and Kassidy setting up the Devil's Night ME. Captures the characters great and further sets up the TTT/SensationSquad rivalry - Ryu dominates AC. TTT dominates Riot. Who's next? - MJF is back! Markout! - Shep has transformed from a voiceless tag partner to a scary motherfucker. Great job Nate! - OtaKRU RPs confuse me greatly. Not a bad thing. collaboration RPs always great. Keep em coming. - Fuck you, Bobby. The Port Authority is where it's at! Bobby continues to prove quality > quantity! - WHAT A MAIN EVENT! Just awesome ring-work from all 3 guys, you never knew how it was going to end until it dide. 518 NEXT! SUPERSHOWS HAVE SUPER EXPECTATIONS, HOOT

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Shit I wasn't booked my first 3 weeks in OCW because you fuckers thought I was an alt, so I understand, trust me.

4 weeks between shows!? REEEEEEE Enjoy your holidays everyone! :o

I agree. I never thought we should put the likes of Sensation and Dupree with the legendary "Spider", but he seemed to wanna get you guys over so it's his decision. What a nice guy!

I see a lot of Trash on this card... although. Obvious omission. Someone trying to stop Trash from being great. I know one thing. OCW Devil's Night just lost a buyer! SAD

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I'm just glad you learned how to spell my character's name(s)!

So what is your 'CRITICISM'? You don't like the name because you don't UNDERSTAND THE ALLUSION. It works on MANY LEVELS. Also - http://media.discordapp.net/attachments/459489773325778944/519962577095229441/unknown.png SO WHERE WE AT HUH newpe IF THE BEST YOU GOT ABOUT MY CHARACTER IS 'ur ugly' Then I will take the W AND GO ON MY WAY double newpe I AM NOT CALLING YOU BALD AS A WAY TO INSULT YOU. I AM DOING IT AS A WAY TO PROVE HOW SILLY YOUR 'ur ugly' CRITICISM IS. triple newpe Where are you pulling this from? Your own ass or old country's ass? I SAID 'MANY' AND DID NOT NAME DROP. NEW OCW TALENT GOES THROUGH the GOAT rookie benchmarks that WERE QUARTZ AND VALKYRIE AND YOU KNOW THAT IS A FACT. I never said any veteran's name... but it seems like you picked something up from OCW RECENTLY... IF YOU WANT SOMETHING TO BE RELEVANT, JUST DRAG TTT INTO IT. SURE FIRE PLAY. QUAD NEWPE HAEV A SEAT REEEEEE

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http://media.discordapp.net/attachments/459489773325778944/519958232983142400/unknown.png Also variations - Tera, Teryn, Tara, Tarra I have a character named "Ijitu". Don't try and lecture me on made up names. Just because you can't understand/appreciate subtleties doesn't mean it's made up. 'you're ugly' does not count as discussion or criticism. Also, you're bald. You would know about riding coattails since many in OCW have been riding Valk and I's since we got here in February.

LETS GIVE THIS A GO, HOOT 1. It's not complicated. Terra means "Earth" and is also a fairly common female first name. double meaning/reference to character/real name. Daturas is both original and the name of a type of flower. Boom roasted 2. It's a face texture. Would you rather me use a default face for your boring default sensibilities? Boom roasted 3. She's standing next to Valkyrie, she's 5'7 boom roasted 4/5. thank you I am pretty great THAT'S BECAUSE IT WAS MADE BY VALKYRIE AND JAKE, TWO OF DA BESS

That's the last straw. I'm done here. Storms out of OCW in a sea of emotion PS Watch your mouth.

Some of the best to ever lace em up show why they are who they are.. Wow what a show and what a slate of matches.

The "Turmoil Lives Matter" review. - Although I'm aware this RP was posted out of order with something else they had planned, it's nice to not only see both rookies be active, but establish a feud with someone. It's nice a long too. I still don't know jack about either character, but this could be the beginning of a good start. - Pretty disappointing that CJ flaked(?). Ricky distancing himself from that would-be feud is a good start. He evens keeps away from too much cliche and aligns himself with the CCW title! The Last Blacksmith vs Ricky Ragnarath I am actually shocked at how this one turned out. OCW's most worked in Season 13 got off to a relatively slow start against TLBS and it showed. I am guilty of thinking most flippy guys (such as these two) don't have too many moves to separate themselves from each other, but TLBS' finisher does it for me. Maybe it's the close up on his face paint, but it works enough. He gets a big win and hopefully rides off this momentum. - Ashley Moore has also done a nice job being active this season. I know the popular narrative is that rookies aren't working, but Ashley has a presence on each show and it makes me want to see another Ashley Moore match. Get the fuck on it, bookerman! Manuel's introduction is well done in a collab effort. He seems to steal the show, writing wise from Ashley in terms of quality. I don't know for sure who is handling Manuel, but maybe not knowing is better for the sake of being unbiased. Damian Bourne vs Leroi Daniels Damian's new look/entrance on the past 2 shows is super different, but at least he's making an effort to establish who he is. Need more RP before I can make that call, but the serious look? It is a big 180 from the wacky DX entrance we saw before from Bournistico. I dig it. Leroi crapples very early in the match, but I can't recall any other issues other than that. Damian handled this easily early, but Leroi DID make a comeback, including a few pretty fun spots in the untied turnbuckle corner. A little long, ultimately though, Damian shows once again how skilled he is by capitalizing with MY finisher. *wink*. Double props for the fancy camera work on the finish. Fun match. - Mistico is... surprisingly easy to work with. TTT BITCHES Mistico vs ???? (Quartz) Was excited to end this pussy's 5-0 winning streak on his home turf, but it wasn't meant to be. Mistico is a very fun match. Not sure what others thought about it, but I felt it very brief, watchable and included a little Damian interaction with a fancy FIN reversal finish. Thanks for that Mistico. - Valk's ability to move from serious to comedic comes back here... I never thought I'd be in this position though... This RP feels random and out of place to me. It's probably the first Valk RP I haven't legit popped at and it's "meh". Like I said in Discord though... Representation > Nothing - The Cort/Shep angle continues. I am glad they made up, although it was tense at one point. Had potential for a big revenge angle. Shep has plenty of reason to be pissed but I am jacked to see "Shep" find his voice this season. Makes AWOL infinitely more interesting. Code Jackman vs Benji Moore Fun match all-around. There is no real buildup but that's okay. What is not okay is Benji being totally lazy and doing no character development. I don't know if he's a face or heel or why he wears that coat or anything. No big FPR stuff that I noticed. The finish was super cool though, Benji accidentally fell directly into the finisher. It looked natural and legit. - While I wish there was more of it, one of the best angles so far this season has been Jehst/Archer. The last two weeks of this angle has been... racy? I'm in that perfect medium between super uncomfortable and intrigued with the Elsa thing. I like her character a lot and thanks to Jehst's investment so far this season, Thomas Archer's exploitation of her has created this perfect hatred towards the character. TLC!!!! Great work by both handlers. Valk/Heather is my #1 most hype angle of DN and this is easily #2. - I commented on the excellent work of Drago in my Riot review, but I feel FloJo needs recognition. I absolutely HATED her direction last season and she's really turned it around... Outside of that super weird, vulgar and out of place Turmoil 214 RP with Jackman, FloJo has been able to maintain interest in her character... at least from my perspective. It's VERY possible this is due to Drago's awesome writing ability and skills that carry Flojo. To be honest, her next angle is going to tell that story.... GO DRAGANA! Wrex vs Nic Betamax I haven't really fallen in love with Betamax to tell you the truth. He's more of an auxiliary character used to put over Wrex in this one... Wrex shows his colors and dominates start to finish. I said it weeks ago when it started, but I do think Wrex mental warfare entrance... copying Austin Lee is one of the most underrated parts of any angle this season! - P3 make me shake in my boots thinking about having to overcome 2 resiliency backpays + a pin breakup. They are able to maintain a strong level of threat while also being fun and wacky. P3 vs AWOL Finally get to see P3 in action against talented players... Fucking scary. P3 has control for most of the match... espcially with Drago in the ring. The match seems to be leading to a P3 victory... before yours truly decides to break that shit up. I love video content in anyway I get it and context can always differentiate between similar cutscenes. CQC/P3 is so heated right now. Wont comment on my own PPV hype but.. I'm very excited to share the ring with two legends (and kick the shit out of both of them.) SHEP!!!! SHEP!!! SHEP!!! So excited to see this formulate into a rivalry finally. Shep has not only found his voice since the season started, but has developed this twisted, heel personality that I really dig. I cannot imagine how this is going to develop next week. This twisted patriot thing who is carrying the belt is still at the top of my boards... Not sure if they're fighting at DN, but either way. I look forward to a long a brutal feud!