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Advancing push. Full Steam ahead!! TOOT TOOT!

This review might be a week or so late but, better late than never I guess. I'll try to keep this one shorter than the last one but be warned my thoughts are not always the clearest so if you have not watched the show please do so this review contains spoilers. First I would like to say awesome work on the Hype Intro loved the WildWest Theme. Great work to all those involved with the production of the show. The Savage Saturday cover-up at the end of matches was kind of weird. If it's like this next year we will have to come up with something better for covering that up. Also, the end cards at the end of the matches are also kind of weird. I not sure if it's so that can be posted on youtube as individual matches later. P3 Segment This is nothing new but I was rather confused with this P3 segment but, that doesn't come as much of a surprise. Mostly due to I'm not familiar with who Terry Knee is but, I did find the entertaining. Loved the Caveman era puns. Great work guys. TMTCJ vs Mark Reese This was a very entertaining match. I would have to say Joopiter was playing a pretty good heel gimmick at the start but, I was wondering why Reese didn't just go out the ring a get him. The Cat and Mouse game started to feel like it was going on too long then Reese grabs him and the real fight starts. This was a solid heel vs face match with the babyface coming out on top. Mark Reese is a nice vintage style well-round character. Good match. That face of Joopiter when he is getting thrown out the ring had me in tears laughing. Winner - Mark Reese Heather & Stacy Clark Rp I thought this was a decent RP from Heather showing she is trying to get control of her demon side. Trying to show the Brians of Bruce Banner (Heather) and the Strength of Hulk (Furiosa) come together. This feud felt very underplayed. And I hate to throw the blame on people but it seemed as if Heather has been the only one building this feud. I don't know if it has to do with personal stuff on the Flojo's end or what but, just seemed very underwhelming. While I'm on the subject lets jump to the match. Flojo vs Heather Match First I would like to point out Jake's commentary about Flojo during her entrance. Maybe it's just me but, jake seemed to not have much to say about Flojo. "Jake: This is a very talented woman coming to the ring she spent a lot of time on her attire I think it looks great. " I don't know I just feel with this being a feud that has been building for a "Month" give or take especially for a returning Heather Angelo. Should have had more to hype this match. Anywho to that match, It started off pretty good but as the match went on it started to break down to absorbing hits and holding reversals. A lot of move dodging to avoid using reversals. It was an okay fight that should have been built better. Winner - Heather Angelo Maxwale I don't get the Maxwale character is he just a jobber? or what is his deal? Other than not know what Maxwale is supposed to be. I'm happy to see the return of Cowboy Quartz. CQ coming out looking like more of a badass than his previous appearances but, it's nice to see he's still around. H20 RP Well, this turns out to be very interesting. I get KD is upset about losing to CQC but why take the title of the one person that has been on your side this entire time? Why is H20 leaving his title unguarded in his house? I would figure he would take that title everywhere with him considering the hell he went through just to get it and how easily it can be taken from him considering his past ventures. Something about this seems off. I look forward to Riot and finding out more about this. Parca vs Grimm vs Klein I got interested in this feud late. But, it got better as it went on. It's a great way for 3 people "new" to OCW to get over all at the same time. I really like the new look for El Parca keep it up. Grimm I'm liking the entrance look but, I feel it might work better with an undertaker type of entrance. I don't know obviously he knows what he's going for but, it will be hard to shake the Kassidy Hayes comments. Also, feel like too much is going on with his mask but, that's just me. This match was very entertaining El Parca was all over the place. El Parca was the shortest one in the ring but, was the standing the tallest a lot of the match. Amazing work from everyone where. Loved seeing Grimm use that mask as a weapon during that match. Nothing negative to say about Klein he was a very dominant force and proved why. Winner - Odon Klein Valkyrie vs Bertha So, I know this was a previous battle from ages ago that most have probably wanted to see happen again. But, honestly, I gave no shits about Bertha from a person that wasn't here for the previous fight and doesn't know much about this character. Bertha just came off as a random NPC for Valkyrie to fight ( no disrespect to spider). With that being said Bertha had a very nice entrance and I loved watching Valkyrie standing next to Bertha and seeing that height difference makes you more interested kind of like watching Rey Mysterio fight the Big Show. This was strength vs speed and watching Valkyrie get tossed around like a child was sheer entertainment. Winner - Valkyrie Code Jackman RP Not a whole lot to say about this RP. I have seen better from Code so I'm not sure if this was writer's block or something but, it was okay. Not a bad RP. Solomon Vs Blacksmith What is going on with Blacksmith? We have a horse head wearing guy with roman armor and gothic mad max personality. Okay..anyway I love the hype video start of the match the beginning of seemed out of place but it all came together. I would really like to see more of these especially for big-name matches but, they take time and not everyone is up for doing it. As for the match Maybe its just me but, I was really hoping to see that first kick to put blacksmith down for the count. That would have been amazing but, that would mean blacksmith would have to job to Caine and I don't see that happening. I loved watching both men grab a kendo stick at the same time and charge toward each other. It was a good fight that was building to that firey table spot. The battle of watching the two fight to see who was gonna go through it was the highlight of that match for me. Great work by both men even if Caine seemed to be off his game during that match. Winner - Blacksmith Zack Xero RP I'm not sure what to think of this RP as of yet. Considering the handler of the CAW I want to see if this will actually go anywhere or will it just be another dead end RP. Only time will tell. Nate / Drago Video I'm not going to say anything bad about this because of the people involved.... THIS SOME BULLSHIT. Drago wouldn't get beat up like that who is this charlatan dressing up like Drago. I beat its Spider doing a Drago cosplay. Jehst RP Jehst has been writing up some damn good RPs and this is just another of them. You would think Jehst would have some kinda bodyguards or armed security protecting him and elsa. Escapally with some psychopath going around attacking people. I mean first Terra, Then Dragana and Zoe and now Elsa. The FUCK Jehst all that money and you can't protect the woman you love. Shame on you. Code vs Malu This was a great match. I was cheering for code because we all know he is the underdog in this fight. I don't care how you want to word it we all know. Even though Malu and Code were tied a lot of the time damage-wise Malu was beating the hell out of Code solely based on the types of moves he was doing. It was a good match but, Code just wasn't ready for Malu. Better luck next time code looking forward to where you go from here. Winner - Malu Alright all done this suppose to go up a day or two ago but, had projects to finish. I watched the matches over twitch to get some of the reactions people had during the stream and I noticed a lot of Kass references in chat as well in the commentary. Just something I found fun and wanted to mention it here. Byebai

LOL That fucking face.

Some people need to learn the hard way. Kass knows what needs to happen. Ps. loving those kick pads. lol

If its Discussion you want let's talk about Cowboy Quartz? Is he making a return and what happen to his boy shorts? how dare you change the Cowboy I know and love. How dare you sir!

Black lives matter Tre, I can't say yours does But, Don't have me make you a statistic.

Review will drop soon need to put some finishing touches on more important things first.

Wasn't this on the webshow too? or am I just losing my mind?

Valkyrie found a new ass kisser.

Just trying to push to page two when possible. Might pump out a small review.

This Comment is Kass approved.

Don't you have Cort's Ass you should be kissing?

I appreciate you explaining that. I hope I didn’t come off as pissy or anything. I wasn’t trying to. Just was looking to get a more clear understanding of what your were referring to. Sorry if my thoughts and concerns didn’t translate well into text.

First I would like to say thank you for the Review Yake. Second I'm rather confused by some of this comment. I get the going down the card thing if I lose can't be the only one fighting Valk for the title understandable. But, I don't understand the being competitive comment. Am I not being competitve? what should I be doing differently? And thank you for the compliment on my rping being better? I haven't changed how I have been doing anything since I started that I'm aware? I did notice a few lines were edited by bossman but, I'm not complaining if he thinks it needed tweaking who am I to bitch. I don't know just looking for some clearing up or something to help me improve if I'm missing something.

Pretty damn good review! Thank you for writing up one.

VERY LONG EMPRESS REVIEW. READ IF YOU DARE. First Off, I would like a big thank you to all the staff and helping hands on this PPV. Production was fantastic. The Arena looked great it was no lution arena but, it was still amazing. Awesome work everyone. Amazing commentary by Jake, Nick, and Mr. Sensation. Everyone has their opinion on the commentary I think they did a great job, but there is always room for improvement and that applies to everything, not just commentary. So as we move forward to a new season let’s always strive to make OCW better every year or until Bossman is sick of us and shuts this shit down finally. Now for the review, I will try my best to get as much as possible if I misunderstand a gimmick or plot point I’m sorry I can’t remember every single story and RP. I’m doing my best other than that these are my opinions I will do my best to word them so they make sense if you don’t like what I write then write your own fucking Review. Intro Hype: Not a crap ton to say but, I wanted to mention it because a lot of time and effort goes into this things and I wanted to give credit I believe it’s Jake that does these and he does an amazing job. Love your work, Jake. If this was not Jake I’m sorry. Substitute Jakes name for your own. Archer Rp / Archer vs. Ty Sparks: I really enjoyed the Archer Academy Challenge it was a great idea to push a lot of the new guys and guys with nothing happening into a great story idea. Amazing work from everyone. Hopefully, some of the guys involved can do something with it now that the story is concluded. But, I guess only time will tell on this case seeing how not a whole lot came from the rookie battle royal last time. Anyway, great work from Archer I really hate his face such a prick. Taking huge shots at Damian Bourne and Benji and which I found pretty funny. As well as a great use of Dupree’s GM role. Match – It was pretty good. I know Archer got a lot of slack for what some are calling a burial match for Sparks. But, honestly, in my opinion for Sparks, this should be a story point. Really from a storytelling standpoint he hasn’t been involved in enough to get buried it’s the 10 sec Blacksmith elimination type of deal. If anything should be something for his character to want to get better because of. Maxx Rp: Not much to say to this but, decent Rp from Maxx. I kind of want to see him and Jehst try to out act each other. P3 Segment: Another entraining segment from P3 Loved the inclusion of Mac this time around. I see how it is Mac becomes a member of P3 but, I was never invited to become a member of P3. T_T but, I guess I can’t blame them he is super kawaii. Inception vs C.Q.C: This was probably the better of the two matches I have seen from these two teams. I wasn’t around for the first. Not to downplay either one of these teams it was a very good match but, CQC was showing why they are on top pretty much the entire fight. As a random side note maybe it’s just me but, Tyson Wagner looks like he could be related to sparks. All in all, it was a nice solid match. Congrats C.Q.C Jehst RP: Pretty good RP from Jehst showing a lot of concern for Elsa. But, does she really need his protection? Also, how is the secret person in the shadows? Is it Blacksmite? Is it Salami Cane? Is it that creepo Joopitor? Is it Blaine? Is it just a creepy Fan? Are they after Elsa to get to Jehst? so many questions. KD Video RP: Simple, Short and Decent. It’s just me not a huge fan of the vertical video stuff but, that’s just a nitpick on my part. The video gets its point across whoever goes up against KD next should be worried. Mark Reese and TMCJ RP: Mark Reese coming off like an after school special on anti-bullying. But, for some reason, I can see it working with this character. As for TMCJ, he has that Saturday Cartoon Villain feel coming from him. Picture Mark Reese as He-man and TMCJ as Skeletor. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Tre Golden Vs Cort Marshall : I was very happy with the outcome of this match. Not because I was rooting for Cort. But, as to where this might go from here. Will Golden see Cort was right all along? Will he continue to try and correct the Cortship? It was a solid match of a Tre trying to figure Cort out while trying to stay true to who he is. Very well put together. Excellent work guys. H20 and Dupree Rp: I won’t say much about this because I think it was said best in the Consequence Podcast. But, I am happy to have H20 back to being H20 and not that cracked out homeless version he turned into for a while. That seems so weird. But, once again Dupree looking good in another RP and making use of that GM role. It’s really nice to see that interaction consider it happens so much in wrestling. A.C. Coba vs Antonio Everrett: Woohoo Coba Congrats!!! Happy to see you get what you deserved for once. Big Big win for Cobra. This takes nothing away from Everrett who put up one hell of a fight. There were so many times It looked as if it was Game Over for Coba but, he seemed to have an extra life ready for each and every time it happened. Very enjoyable match. I did feel like it was going a little long, but when it comes to a title fight it is to be expected so it wasn’t a bad thing. Loved the new attire for Everrett really fit that I’m better than you ego trip attitude he was having. As for Coba plus put some facial hair back on his face I don’t like babyface Coba something about it just seems off to me Joshua Tucker Rp: Good RP from Mr. Tucker just looking to see who will take him up on this offer. Tucker needs a good heel or face. Honestly not fully sure which side he’s on just yet. Maybe there was something I missed. Not much else to say Keep it up. Telos vs. Bobby Minio: Telos had a good run and this doesn’t lower my opinion on Telos at all. But, Bobby did a great job of beat the hell out of him. Telos got in a lot of great hits like the powerbomb into the post and a pick up chokeslam. But, this was just all bobby. I would love to see Telos have a rematch against Bobby or even go after Archer. Good match but, Bobby had his number this time. Congrats Bobby. Dragana Rp: Sneak attack on Dragana! Ohhh this was a good read. Looks as if Dragana knows who it is. Does Drago know Dragana is bleeding out in a Dojo? Does Drago care? Where are Aerith and Elsa when all this is happening? For a group, they seem to spend a lot of time away from each other doing secretive things. Seems odd. Someone that likes to use a baseball bat huh? Udon Klain? Answers I need them. Udon Klain Video Rp: I think this was a better representation of Udon having his sights set on a new target. Versus the weird headgear thing, he did last time. That outfit and gimmick didn’t seem to fit what he had built for that character to this point. Empress Vs Valkyrie: I won’t talk a lot this match since I was in it. But, It was a fun match to have I enjoyed working with Valkyrie. Story Wise things may have gotten a little muddy but, I think we pulled off what we were going for which was a more personal type of story. Not another let’s have a completive fight and may the best person win Bullshit. Congrats to Valk on her win. I look forward to seeing who she will be up against next. Wrex Rp: I Love this Rp. I haven’t seen Wrex write much since I joined so it was a very enjoyable read. Heather and H20 Rp: I’m still new to the Heather Angelo character. So I’m not too familiar with her and H20’s relationship by much other than Valk and she had some problems with each other and tried to beat the hell out of each other over H20 i think. I don’t know, but I’m looking to see more from her. Paul Pugh vs Wrex: I can’t say I have cheered so much for Wrex at all but, This was one of those moments I desperately wanted him to win this match. Not because I found Pugh to be some great heel or even that the story building up to his match had me super invested. But, I just really want to see Wrex beat the hell out of Pugh. Something about Wrex beating up a man with failing kidneys and Alzheimer's is just right up my idea of Wrex. Love the Wrex fighting style. And I get this is Wrex vs. Paul Pugh and I’m not sure if any of this has been a built-up feud a long time coming or old history stuff but, I mean 31 mins this felt like a long match I mean it was no fight for Time and Space length but, it was long and I might get some frowns from saying that but, this is my review so fuck you. Other than the length of the match and the fighting in the crowd stuff it was a decent fight. And the only thing I have about the crowd fight stuff is this games crowd fighting is soo stiff other than that little area with the table and trash can. Other than that good match. But, I loved the Austin Lee Deathmatch more. Drago and Nate Rp / Video : I wasn’t around for the first Drago vs Nate match but, I am super excited to see round two of this. Since I have been here I have only seen Drago fight maybe 3 times. So to watch a match featuring Drago and Nate well now was the perfect time to join OCW. Video: Video for Drago Vs Nate part 1 was amazing it was excellently done and its a nice simple recap for those that weren’t here or those that wanted to relive that moment. Awesome work. Valkyrie Rp: After reading and re-reading Valks Rp. My opinion on this Rp it wasn’t that bad honestly I’ve read a lot of these Rps from her just to get an understanding of the character to help build an RP and this isn’t really anything new. I get that it kinda shits on the women’s title as not being worth much but does it really bury the division or will it just make it oh so much sweeter when Valkyrie finally gets her teeth kicked in and someone takes that title from her. I don’t know maybe it’s just me being a glass half full type of person. I see Valkyrie getting a Everrett type of personality. H20 vs Doc Green : Okay, first I know this has been talked about in the Podcast but, I want to say I agree that the switching from the Guards to coming out in the crowd was a weird choice. I kind of get what he was going for but, on paper, it probably sounds cooler. This was a pretty damn funny match. Watching H20 hitting a running corner kick on Doc just to end up on the floor giving Doc the upper hand than doing springboard dive right into a kick. I couldn’t stop laughing it was too damn funny. We need to fire the cameraman for those shitty camera angles during Doc’s outside dive attack. It was a great fight I didn’t see H20 winning this match mostly due to how much Bossman shits on H20 after losing his title so color me surprised when he picks up the W and wins the Title after an Outta nowhere riptide superkick. It was a great way to end the fight. But, wait there’s more...FUCK CORT! Fucking Cort trying to chase the fuck in how dare you! BUT, WAIT THERE’S EVEN MORE FUCKING B17 COMING TO RAIN ON CORT’S PARADE! This shit got so insane in the last few minutes. We got B17, Cort, and H20 all dressed in the same colors looking. Will this lead up to a B17 and Cort team up at some point? What the hell was B17 gonna do? He doesn’t have a case or anything just sticking his nose where it doesn’t belong. Sorry lost track of my thoughts at the end of this whole thing. All in all, I enjoyed the show it had it’s up and its downs but, what can I say nothing is perfect. Okay, I’m done this shit is long enough. If you made it this far thank you very much for reading all this bullshit. If you are not happy what anything I have said about you or your match I don’t care. Fuck You SMC.

Due to lack of reviews of the ppv I'll be throwing my two cents in a little later. Really feel like there would have have been more interaction for a ppv. But, I haven't done much either so I also take the blame for this. I will do better. But, Look forward to a very long review coming.

Look at her traitor! Can't even trust herself. So sad Ashley Moore.

Well This was one hell of a show. Amazing work!

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Cowboy Quartz gets his own PPV finally.

A black jaguar pulls up to the outside of an apartment building the engine of the vehicle comes to a halt and the door opens. Ashley Moore steps out of the vehicle and makes her way toward the entrance of the building. She stops just short of the door and takes a moment. She looks at her watch which reads 1130 pm. Ashley Moore: She should still be awake it’s not that late. Ashley makers her way into the building and up the stairs. She follows the numbers on the doors until she is face to face with a dark wood door with the number 6 made of metal on it. As she gets closer to the door the loud laughter of several people can be heard from the other side. She reaches up and knock on the door but, just as she gets ready to the door swings up. She’s greeted by a very stocky Asian gentleman wearing a black suit with a cigar in his mouth. Ashley takes a step back as the guy is staring her up and down. Guy: Are you the entertainment? I don’t know what took you so long but, don’t expect a tip. The guy lights up the cigar and blows smoke into her face. Ashley Moore: Who do you think you are? As Ashley starts to take turn and walk away Empress grabs Ashley’s arm before she could get too far. Ashley turns around thinking it was the guy that grabbed her, ready to kick him in the head. Empress: Woah..Calm down it’s me! Don’t pay any attention to him. He is just a family member who is visiting from Kyoto. What brings you around here this late? Ashley Moore: I had some concerns about this Valkyrie thing I wanted to ask you about. Empress: Uhh..Okay well, come on in.. Come meet everyone. Grab a drink and we can talk. Ashley Moore: Everyone? Empress drags Ashley Moore into the apartment where she is soon surrounded by 6 men all wearing black suits. Empress pushes her way pass the guys packed in the tiny apartment. She walks up to the guy with the cigar and grabs it out of his mouth. She starts yelling at the guy in Japanese before putting the cigar out on the guy’s suit. Empress: Sorry about that I don’t like smoking. So what’s on your mind? Ashley Moore: Can we talk in private, please? Empress: Um..sure..I mean if that’s what you want. Empress waves at the guys in suits and tells them to leave the room in Japanese. The guys get up and walk out the front door. As Empress grabs a drink from the fridge and passes one to Ashley before falling back into a chair in the kitchen. Empress: So what’s on your mind? Ashley Moore: I thought about it and it just doesn’t add up. Three days in a row I could barely sleep. Why are they still missing? At first, I thought they just misunderstood our little prank. But why are they still gone? Ashley Moore: Valkyrie can’t just make all this up, the letter, all the blood, there is even a police investigation. What the frick happened there after we left. God, I already talk like her, Ashley Moore: Didn’t you say you hired a few fake goons and they would scare them a little and then clarify it is all a joke. Just to mess with Valkyrie. I even made fun of her afterward, thinking it would all be over after a few days. She takes a break, but continues before Empress can answer. Ashley Moore: What did those guys do? Did it get out of hand? Why are the parents still missing after all those weeks? We may be ruthless, but … but we don’t kill people … , do we … Empress? Ashley looks at her not knowing what is true and what is false. Empress jumps up from the chair and grabs Ashley. Empress: Woah Woah..calm down turbo. Everything is fine..you asked me to get some goons and I got some goons. No one was killed. We both agreed to make it look like a crime scene remember. You even paid for the pig blood. I just wrote the letter and everything is just to spice things up. Everything is just fine. Empress: Every plan has a couple of hiccups, but everything is just as we planned. Don’t worry about it. Valk will have her parents back in no time. They probably just lost track of time or something. Empress walks Ashley over to a bean bag chair in the corner and sits her down. She grabs Ashley’s hand with the drink and lifts it up to Ashley’s month. Empress: Take a drink...You need to relax...you are starting to freak me out. Everything is fine. Come on repeat after me. Everything is fine. Both: Everything is fine. Empress: You see… Ashley Moore: Yes, maybe I was just ... Ashley Moore: Wait a second. Ashley Moore: It is not fine. It doesn't explain why they are still missing? Three weeks later. And Valk is missing now, too. Ashley Moore: And what is with those guys you had over here? … Don’t tell me they were the goons you send to the parent’s house. Empress: Don’t worry about Valk. She’s probably off having some temper tantrum somewhere because Mr. Sensation didn’t like her twitter post or something. As for her parents, they are fine you will see. Just had a couple of hiccups with planning but they will be back next week. The mom got scared when the goons broke into the house and cut herself while cooking so they took her to the hospital to get checked out. That’s all. Empress: As for those guys... don’t worry about them. They are family they heard what we were doing and just wanted to help. No big. Empress: Let’s not talk about this anymore. Let’s talk about getting that title off Valkyrie. Ashley Moore: Ok, I am happy everything is fine. Please tell me next time when something goes wrong. I even thought that you may have kidnapped them. Silly me. She takes a huge sip from her drink. Ashley Moore: Then we can fully concentrate on putting that belt around your waist. And I even had remorse towards Valkyrie. Empress: You have nothing to worry about. They spend the rest of the night emptying their drinks and plotting how to end Valkyrie’s championship reign.

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