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Nate Mac

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  1. That punishment though. Hahaha Jack and Jill hahahahaha
  2. The cabin belonging to Leo Grimm comes into view, the door opens with a soft push. Leo can be seen with his back to the cameras sitting in the chair facing the wall. He is holding his mask in is hands, rocking back and forth, and what seems as mumbling to himself. He suddenly stops, without turning around. Leo Grimm:. I see you feel comfortable just barging into my home without an invitation. There seems to be a trend, first the arrogant Cort Marshall first accusing me of deeds that are beneath me. If I wanted to hurt you I would do it in front of you, not sneak around and hide like a bitch posing as someone else. Now you feel entitled to the same distinct action of disrespect. Leo Grimm: And now, B-17, in the middle of his mid-career emo crisis and his little lost puppies run their mouths and mock me. I am not the one to test or push, revenge is sweeter than berries and more painful and darker than the pits of hell. [B]Leo puts his mask on, then turns around to face the camera. Then with amazing speed for a man his size, and snatches the cameraman by his shirt, putting his face right into view in the lens. [/b] Leo Grimm: His heavy breathing and intensity make him sound as if he has become unstable You seem to have caught me in a foul mood, one in which I desperately desired to remain undisturbed. Now...Now what to do with you, trespasser? Your transgressions have made me filled with angst! Oh, shhh, shhh, you look worried. Is it the mask? Just know this is the one true face of Deliverance and today you shall rejoice in painful redemption. Off camera we hear a scream come from the cameraman, followed by a very loud THUD. Then a slam of the door, and the sound of chains locking. The camera catches a returning Grimm to his chair, removing his mask and his mumbling and rocking back and forth continue.
  3. Hahahaha
  4. Yeah sorry. I put it in too early.
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  6. I wasn’t sure how the Hobbit comment was going to work, I thought it was funny so I’m glad it had that effect! And you’re right I gotta go for the kill, I just wanted more offense showcased but no more hesitation. This lost cost me more than I wanted, but it’s actually feeding me a storyline at the same time. So here’s to the next match!!
  7. The Dirty Mac
  8. Shoot I’ve tried to get tag partners but no one wants to do it. I have a storyline and everything just waiting.
  9. The recognizable cabin of Leo Grimm comes into view. On a chair by the wood stove Leo Grimm gingerly shifts positions as he stokes the coals inside the stove. The mask which has been a symbol of his promise for Deliverance lays in a box by his feet, his face like his body, is wrapped in bandages. He does not lift his head to face the camera, he just stokes the coals repeatedly. Leo Grimm: I want to tell a story. A story of a broken man who travelled lengths to seek his purpose, but continually met disappointment instead of the Glory he was promised to receive upon Completely of Deliverance. Grimm tosses what appears to be pieces of dried leather into the fire, setting a small blaze, then continues with his story. Leo Grimm:. This eager man wandered for years and searched villages around the world looking for his true path. When asked by those he encountered what he was searching for, his reply was one word. “ Redemption. “ He was given many directions and advice on where to look, he tried churches, evangelicals, priests, monks, witch doctors and those blessed with the visions of the future, all to no avail. Leo Grimm:. So he continued on his quest, and when asked if he feared the answer and found what he was looking for, he replied “I’ve never felt fear once in my life, why fear at the end, no matter how Grimm?” Grimm tosses another piece of the leather material into the stove. Leo Grimm:. After hundreds of dead ends, he found a old woman in tattered clothing in a desolate cabin in the Forrest. She told him of a dragon who could give both purpose and redemption, and his hopes had grown far greater than ever before, for this could be the lead to the pieces he had sought and relentlessly journeyed for over many years. She spoke of a ferryman at a river who could take him to the dragon, for a small price. He questioned what the price to pay was for he had been traveling for sometime and he hadn’t any money for trade. Leo Grimm:. The old woman cackled and said “There is no cent which can be traded, only payment is three hairs from the Devil’s head. Our hero was confused, how was this deed possible? She told him trust the Dragon and the deed shall be done and the fee will be paid in full. She crushed and grated roots and leaves and bone and several other ingredients and made a potion for the traveler to drink, who without hesitation drank the entire potion. Grimm stokes the coals again, adding more leathery fuel to the fire. Leo Grimm: The wanderer’s head became dizzy and he fell to his knees on the floor, and passed out within seconds of drinking the potion. When he awoke he was at the gates of Hell. In front of him stood the Devil who stared into his soul and saw there was no fear of the hell awaiting him; bewildered the Prince of Lies asked who this man was and what did he want. Our hero still feeling the effects of the potion responded “ I am A mere traveler , and I have come for three strands of hair from your head for payment to the ferryman to cross the great river and seek the dragon.” Leo grans another piece of leather, but as we close in, we discover it’s not leather at all, but the dried out pieces of flesh he had peeled from his body weeks ago. Leo Grimm:. Upon hearing this and gazing into the soul of the tired traveler and saw not only fearlessness but also a light of purpose shinning and replied “I too was once filled with light, the same light I see in you. You do not fear what lies beyond these gates, the eternal fire of damnation which awaits your final destiny. I will give you three hairs, but I will collect a return for this favor one day when you truly have forgotten and believe I will never show.” Our hero simply smirked and took the hairs, after grabbing them, he again was overcome with the effects of the potion and awoke in the cabin with his hand smoking and the three hairs in his hand. Leo Grimm:. The old lady cackled again “I din’t think you would return alive, yet here you are. You may rest tonight, but tomorrow you go to the river.” So he rested and dreamt of two red eyes Hidden behind smoke and shadow staring at him, calling to him. He woke and rose from a small cot and left for the river. Grimm shifts slowly in the chair before throwing more of his dried flesh into the stove. Leo Grimm:. A single green light led him to a small dock with a horn sitting on a stand to summon The Ferryman, which he quickly drew to his lips and a loud below cane from the horn. In the distance through fog a shadowy figure on a small row boat came into view. Without a word the Ferryman held his hand out for payment, in which the wanderer places the three hairs in his hand. The Ferryman looked at his palm and then to our hero, and pointed to the western shore, then handed him the ancient oar. Without a breath passing he took the oar and started paddling across the river. Leo Grimm: after reaching the western shore he disembarked from the ferry and began to follow the green light ahead. Finally after three days he can to the lair of the Dragon. After a brief pause in awe of the wonderous sight he entered. He could hear the dragon snarling and huffing in the distance, then a loud bellowing voice spoke. “Who dares enter my lair? Who dares to believe they are worthy to stand in my presence?” Our hero answered, “ I am simply a traveler searching for redemption oh great and dreadful dragon.” Dragon And you believe you are worthy of that which I can bestow upon you!? Step into my view, oh unwise and doomed one. Leo Grimm:. Our champion steps out of the shadows and faces the Dragon. The Dragon spread his wings and stood on his feet to display his enormous presence the let out a terrible roar. The wanderer did not move or cower, for he knew not fear. He stares at the dragon and said “I am here to do your work. Just tell me what you want me to do.” Dragon I see you are pure of fear and have a mighty fire inside you. You shall be my tool, my tool of Deliverance to all those unworthy. But in return you shall deliver to me the fears, the souls and the gold of the falsely claimed Champions. Leo Grimm:. The wandeeer replied, “How and where do you wish for me to go, my gracious lord?” The Dragon responded, “There is a place filled with many souls, souls which are soiled and belong to me, they require Deliverance, that’s where I send you, to OCW. Grimm cautiously stands and walks to the kitchen to grab a bottle of unlabeled liquid and takes a huge swill, then returns with the bottle to his chair. Leo Grimm The dragon warned of consequences for failure, but our hero could not imagine that now he would ever fail. The dragon threw a mask to the traveler “this is your face, the face of deliverance, where it and return victorious, or you shall suffer pain in ways you never knew you could feel.” With that the dragon began to torture our hero, making true to his promise of unbelievable pains. Dragon. Now you have been purified through the pain of Deliverance. Take that pain and deliver the same to those unworthy. Leo Grimm. Our hero followed the orders of the Dragon and set out to OCW to do the dragons works. However, he failed in his mission, for he forgot that over anything Dragons love gold, and he did not care about gold or treasures, he cared only to bring Deliverance. So the dragon punished him, and forces him to peel his own flesh to save the dragon the trouble. Using herbs and potions he procured from the old cackling woman, he began to heal, unmarked. Leo looks into the camera. Leo Grimm: yes. I am the wanderer, I am the traveler, I am Deliverance. I have burnt the pieces of flesh which marked my own journey through Deliverance, after I purified myself through pain and suffering, I will not fail again. I’m here for the unworthy, and I will take your precious treasures, your false idol golden championships, and I will usher in an Age of Deliverance. My only question is who is first? Who dares to step in that ring and face me and their extinction? I am calling to you cowards, who will answer? Leo Grimm turns his attention back to the burning coals as the screen blacks out.
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  10. The familiar creepy cabin that belongs to Leo Grimm comes into view. Slowly the camera zooms in, clothesline’s of hanging dried flesh are seen in the background as we close in on the entrance. Inside we see the single chair in the room empty and a closed unlit stove with a knife stained with a dried crusted substance on the blade. A crash and thudding noise is heard and a shadowy figure comes through the bedroom door. Leo Grimm wrapped in bandages stands in the doorway. His mask is the only recognizable feature in view. Leo Grimm: For months I have promised Deliverance to OCW, but lost my own way along the path. I have seen the Dragon, and he told me my mission for Deliverance must be pure, so I have purified myself through the fire of the dragon. And I was bestowed a vision, a blessing, a second chance to be a messenger and Prophet of Deliverance. Leo Grimm: To stare into the abyss and see the eyes of the Dragon, will humble. ground and guide a lost Shepard. The valley is dark and never ending and I walk through unafraid as I heal, for I Am Deliverance, and OCW is my valley. When I threw those shameful false idols into the river, the message was clear, until I allowed myself to be distracted by fools who thought they could silence my message. Leo Grimm carefully moves to the chair and sits. Leo Grimm: I have a message for all at OCW. I know purification through pain, now, you all will feel that agony, that desperation for the pain to end, but I have the Dragon of Deliverance who will heal me, what have you got? Grimm picks up pieces of the dried filleted flesh, and begins sewing the pieces together while humming. The camera zooms out as Grimm looks up, eyes focused into the camera. Leo Grimm: The Wrath of the God of War will be unleashed. Soon. The camera fades out.
  11. I know. It’s a risky route to go, I am interested to see where I take it as well hahaha
  12. Deep in the Forrest we close in on a familiar small worn cabin. Muffled screams, howls and laughter can be heard coming from inside. As we enter we can see a clothesline which appears to be drying out thin pieces of a leathery material, a lit wood stove with an open cover and a fillet knife resting in the coals. Leo Grimm is sitting next to the stove bleeding from his upper torso with his head tilted back. He raises his head and looks into the camera. Leo Grimm: For months I have spoken about purification and Deliverance through pain. The pieces on the board have been set and the process for those lucky enough to have been chosen; those who have dared to stare into the darkness and gaze into the eyes of the mighty dragon their pieces are set into motion. Leo Grimm: But I have failed so self purification through pain is my penance, and I must oblige as any true Prophet of Deliverance should. Grimm looks toward the stove and reaches for the knife. The blade is glowing From the heat of the coals. Grimm brings the blade to his left shoulder and begins to carefully slice into the tissue, removing the tattooed layers of epidermis and buries his head into his right shoulder and releases a blood curdling scream which turns into laughter. He carefully hangs the freshly filleted skin on the clothesline and returns the knife to the coals and then to his seat. Leo Grimm: As you see, purification can be refreshing and completely blissful. It is also time consuming, but you are more than welcome to stay and watch the completion of my purification if you desire. Watch me, for only through me can you receive true Deliverance for I am the Way. I Am The Way. The camera fades out as Grimm reaches for the blade once again.
  13. That’s not to take anything away from Aisu. He did his stuff and the ending was cool. I saw it comin (wink wink white shoes) but the way it unfolded was good! I liked it, so great storytelling for Parca and Aisu. And damnit Odon. Revenge!!!! That clothesline was perfect, I was hoping for the big boot but I’ll take that bump Hahahaa.
  14. Odon Klein Promo: God damn this guy can make a good caw and write a nice ass promo. I’m a huge fan of the hitman gimmick for sure it’s so dope. I think regardless of the outcome with what happens this guy can always pose a threat. He’s this big toned guy that can cause a can of whoop ass and also give you a solid concussion with a bat too! Leo Grimm Promo: On a technical note, I love the fact that both of their promos are back to back. I fuck with it heavy and think it really added great to the flow of the show. Leo yet again is showing no matter what whether he wins or loses he can write a damn good promo. I am such a huge fan of his character as well (Rookies stay together damnit you can’t tell me othewise!) but seriously his promos are always such good reads and I cannot wait to see where his character goes from here. Thank you. It was fun working with you both, Odon came through big with the video portions and y’all helped me out a lot in terms of calling me out on my shit (which I do honestly appreciate) and the story to me has potential to be one of those long term rivalries which could pop back off in the future. Despite all the criticism and dislike I’ve read about the “Splinter Cell” Klein, I actually thought it was dope and creative, his ownership of the character and development is perfect IMO. And I love to see him just throw people around (which is usually me in DMs ahaha) both of you really helped me and I appreciate it. Rookies unite!!! Any other rookies or anyone not havin anything goin on hit me up. I’m good for another brawl.
  15. That’s Edgar Allen Poe for you savages
  16. Leo Grimm is sitting on the chair on the porch outside his cabin thinking about his week off from riot and frustrations due to the lack of challengers In Dark Matches Leo Grimm: Of all the feelings a human possesses, fear is the the most challenging to overcome. Fear prevents a person from reaching their highest potential. I have seen the fear in OCW. Leo Grimm I have promised deliverance and that reality must have put the fear in the hearts of all the roster, for I find myself constantly unchallenged and alone here without a worthy adversary. I will share these thoughts with the OCW universe. Leo Grimm pauses momentarily Leo Grimm From childhood’s hour I have not been As others were—I have not seen As others saw—I could not bring My passions from a common spring— From the same source I have not taken My sorrow—I could not awaken My heart to joy at the same tone— And all I lov’d—I lov’d alone— Then—in my childhood—in the dawn Of a most stormy life—was drawn From ev’ry depth of good and ill The mystery which binds me still— From the torrent, or the fountain— From the red cliff of the mountain— From the sun that ’round me roll’d In its autumn tint of gold— From the lightning in the sky As it pass’d me flying by— From the thunder, and the storm— And the cloud that took the form (When the rest of Heaven was blue) Of a demon in my view— Leo Grimm: I see now I must take matters into my own hands. Too many fools are chasing golden false idols than worrying about the deliverance which is coming, and that is a grave mistake. Leo Grimm stands up and walks inside his cabin.
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    Leo Grimm

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  18. Leo Grimm is sitting in his meditation position at the Grimm House. The Kalix fan is nowhere to be seen, however there what looks like a dried pool of blood by the radiator with a path of blood leading to the back of the room. Grimm slowly lifts his head to bring the now fear inspiring mask into view. Leo Grimm: I have promised to bring deliverance to OCW, and Pandora’s Box has been opened. I told you I do not waste energy focusing on wins and losses or chase false idols like gold or titles. I focus on deliverance. Leo Grimm: That definition varies per person, and I have a plan for all of you for I have the sight bestowed by powers your feeble minds could never understand. What I offer is salvation and liberation for all of OCW. There are many stories and fairy tales we as a society choose to believe and even force on our children. Leo Grimm: For example, Santa Claus, The Easter Bunny, The Tooth Fairy, a baby savior of mankind who walked on water, a prophet who found a golden book written by angels in the woods, a paradise after death with a number of virgins awaiting them, a God who captured lighting in his hands, a little girl who couldn’t tell the difference between her grandmother and a wolf, a little blond girl who entered a bears home and laid in their beds and ate their food. Leo Grimm A rookie in OCW who rose to the top as an underdog inspiring hope to all that all they need is an opportunity, an opportunity to receive gold, praise from the fans and management , some don’t even want to try, just ride the tails of others momentum, some desire to wreck havoc for a chance, an opportunity to be that champion, a desire to be recognized by fans with hopes of an after party and some just for power, the desire to collect more gold, money, praise and recognition. Leo Grimm: In all stories of old they have different names but they are widely recognized as the 7 deadly sins. Pride, Envy, Wrath, Gluttony, Sloth, Lust and Greed . And those sins are pulsing through the veins in OCW. I have been sent by a higher power to bring deliverance, and cleanse through sweet suffering and pain, and I have such sights to show you. Your Deliverance will come and when you least expect it, so lock your doors and check under your beds, The Grimm Ending awaits you. Grimm bows his head and returns to his seated meditation pose.
  19. Who’s that? Did someone leave?
  20. After Riot a letter is delivered backstage, and a cameraman rushes out the arena door The camera approaches the House of Grimm slowly. We hear muffled screams coming from inside. The cameraman opens the door and sees the Kalix fan with his shirt ripped to shreds, knocked out and chained to a radiator In the middle of the room we see Riot Commentator “Big Al” Piling tied up in a chair with a gag in his mouth. He begins squirming and wide eyed trying to bounce the chair towards the door as we hear his muffled grunts and screams. We hear a sound come from the kitchen area as Leo Grimm appears wearing an apron reading “Feed Them Deliverance”. Grimm stares at the cameraman and steps forward, motioning to him to step back and starts waving his pointer finger back and forth. Leo Grimm:. Tsk Tsk Tsk, Not in this house. I haven’t fed my guest yet. Grimm has in his hands a pot of some steaming substance, and looks to Big Al. Big Al starts shaking his head and continues his muffled noises which sound like “No, No, No” being repeated. Grimm approaches Big Al and sets the pot in the floor of the cabin, and is inches from his face. Leo Grimm:. Now Albert, can I call you Albert? Look Albert, I have traveled this world multiple times and in many cultures it is considered very rude for a guest to deny food from the host. I don’t like it when people are rude. You’re not going to be rude are you? Hmmm? Big Al looks in fear at Grimm then shifts his eyes to the pot on the floor. He hangs his head in defeat and shakes it side to side. Leo Grimm: Perfect! Then it’s time to eat! I know you’re hungry, you’re always hungry. You ate all that chicken I left you before I threw you into the furnace. Lucky for you the furnace wasn’t lit. Buuuut before you dine on this special meal I have prepared for you, I have a question. Leo Grimm: Now, at Riot you said I sound like a rookie, so you must be a wise man. Do you consider yourself wise? LOOK AT ME! Big Al lifts his head and doesn’t know what to do, so he stares is fear as Leo Grimm tilts his head to the side as to read his thoughts. Leo Grimm: Well, let me ask you another question then. If you can tell what a rookie sounds like, then you surely can tell what a pig sounds like, right? No need to answer, I know you do. So I’m going to remove this rag from your mouth, which you can thank “Mr. I Love Kalix” over there for, and you’re going to let me hear your best pig noises for me. Do you understand? Grimm pulls out a three foot machete from underneath his apron. Big Al starts to cry and sob but shakes his head in agreement. Leo Grimm: Now, once I remove this gag, if I hear anything other than pig noises, then you will find your deliverance. That is the only time I say it. Grimm removes the gag and Big Al starts oinking and snorting like a pig. Leo Grimm stares at him and listens to this man pig oinking his fat heart out. Then raises the machete and swings it at Big Al who releases a very high pitched squeal. The ropes that had him tied fall to the floor. Leo Grimm: Very well done little piggy, ah ah, don’t get up. Your dinner is on the floor. Get down there and eat it. But squeal like a happy piggy going all the way home. Terrified out of his mind Big Al falls to the floor and starts to put his hand in the pot, but Grimm places the machete on his hand to stop him. Leo Grimm: Do pigs eat with their cloven feet? Get your face in there and eat like the pig you are and I want to hear you squeal! DO IT NOW! Mortified and humiliated Big Al squeals and oinks and snorts as he is face first in the pot eating his meal. Leo Grimm: Now get up swine. I hope you enjoyed your meal, now take your ass back to HQ and out of my sight before you become the last meal for my other guest. GET OUT!” Big Al runs as fast as he can out of the house and through the woods back to The arena. Leo Grimm then shifts his focus to the unconscious fan chained to the radiator. Leo Grimm: Deliverance comes to us all eventually. Now Mr. Cameraman unless you want your deliverance now I suggest you leave just as fast as the man pig. I have unfinished business to attend to. The cameraman rushes out of the house following the path Big Al made, and we hear loud screams start coming from the cabin.
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  21. Good matches! Great job everybody involved!
  22. Hey boss man, I have a buttload if submissions in the Riot show. The one titled “Leo Grimm” is the only one necessary the rest can be deleted. I erased what was submitted and they all say “delete” in the post. I know I made a huge mess and I apologize for that. Rookie mistake.
  23. I’ll still wear the cone of shame.
  24. Dang a thumbs down hahaha that bad huh? I now must wear the cone of shame.
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